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Array ( [sid] => 22727 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => She Left So Quietly… [time] => 2003-09-04 09:05:00 [hometext] => It hurts even if we think of losing our loved ones. I pray to God, nothing of this sort should happen to any of us. [bodytext] => I ran up to her floor, suddenly started thinking,
Why are all here & why are they weeping???

Could hear voices murmur, “It was her mistake,
She would have lived if she had applied the brake”

Mind refusing to gulp down all this ill talk,
Hurriedly paced to her room with a quick walk.

Opened the room to see her with all my guts,
Only to find her lying in full of bruises & cuts.

Eyes got numb and my face got cold,
Heard the whole thing that was untold.

Went down nearer and sat closely beside her,
Still in hope, nothing has happened to her.

The heart so now is full of strange fears,
Could hold no more those falling tears.

People now came closer to take her away,
I stopped them and stood in their way.

“Oh please don’t take my love away from me,
Please leave me, Nooooooooo It Cant be.”

At last they took her out of my sight,
Left me alone crying that whole night.

Days suddenly felt like ages to pass by,
She was my only life to live with & last by.

“God, why did u take my Love from me?
What was the mistake done by me???.”

Consoling myself deep in my heart,
We had to meet & then fall apart.

I pray to my God that heavens fall upon u,
Oh my Sweetheart, I will forever Love you….
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She Left So Quietly…

Contributed by zee on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I ran up to her floor, suddenly started thinking,
Why are all here & why are they weeping???

Could hear voices murmur, “It was her mistake,
She would have lived if she had applied the brake”

Mind refusing to gulp down all this ill talk,
Hurriedly paced to her room with a quick walk.

Opened the room to see her with all my guts,
Only to find her lying in full of bruises & cuts.

Eyes got numb and my face got cold,
Heard the whole thing that was untold.

Went down nearer and sat closely beside her,
Still in hope, nothing has happened to her.

The heart so now is full of strange fears,
Could hold no more those falling tears.

People now came closer to take her away,
I stopped them and stood in their way.

“Oh please don’t take my love away from me,
Please leave me, Nooooooooo It Cant be.”

At last they took her out of my sight,
Left me alone crying that whole night.

Days suddenly felt like ages to pass by,
She was my only life to live with & last by.

“God, why did u take my Love from me?
What was the mistake done by me???.”

Consoling myself deep in my heart,
We had to meet & then fall apart.

I pray to my God that heavens fall upon u,
Oh my Sweetheart, I will forever Love you….




Copyright © zee ... [ 2003-09-04 09:05:00]
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Re: She Left So Quietly… (User Rating: 1 )
by Daydreamer on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 09:42:47 AM AEST
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This was a very sad but well written poem. AS you said its hard to lose your loved ones and its hard to understand why God would give us something so wonderful and rip it from us. I wrote one called Consequences that is kinda like this you should check it out.


Re: She Left So Quietly… (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 12:41:44 PM AEST
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they do leave us oh so quietly.....sad write...beautiful flow....


Re: She Left So Quietly… (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 02:46:32 PM AEST
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Sad...but beautifully written.
Saira




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