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Array ( [sid] => 22665 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Darkest Of Night... [time] => 2003-09-03 02:35:00 [hometext] => How It Used To Be....Only Dark Of Night Gave Me Hope... [bodytext] => It used to be I existed,held only by loneliness
My closest friend was a shadow of emptiness
I walked the streets with solitude by my side
And only the wind dried all the tears I cried

Only in the darkness,in dreams did you show
Then in the morning light,I had to watch you go
Day after day,night followed night,I wept
All I had were fantasies,created while I slept

Always wishing for a love,a home where I could lay
Someone to give my every breath,how I hoped and prayed each day

I wandered aimlessly in circles,
Aways falling back amongst old friends
It seemed emptines,loneliness and solitude
Would be mine until the end

Then one night amid my dreams
I found nothing,you were gone
I searched every place I'd been with you
I felt lost and more alone

I didnt want the sun to find me
Nor did I have a need to stay asleep
I had nowhere left to turn to
Even my dreams I couldn't keep

Yet time moves on and I awoke
Another battle through the tears
All I could do was wait for night
And hope it took me far from here

*to be continued* :)



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Darkest Of Night...

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



It used to be I existed,held only by loneliness
My closest friend was a shadow of emptiness
I walked the streets with solitude by my side
And only the wind dried all the tears I cried

Only in the darkness,in dreams did you show
Then in the morning light,I had to watch you go
Day after day,night followed night,I wept
All I had were fantasies,created while I slept

Always wishing for a love,a home where I could lay
Someone to give my every breath,how I hoped and prayed each day

I wandered aimlessly in circles,
Aways falling back amongst old friends
It seemed emptines,loneliness and solitude
Would be mine until the end

Then one night amid my dreams
I found nothing,you were gone
I searched every place I'd been with you
I felt lost and more alone

I didnt want the sun to find me
Nor did I have a need to stay asleep
I had nowhere left to turn to
Even my dreams I couldn't keep

Yet time moves on and I awoke
Another battle through the tears
All I could do was wait for night
And hope it took me far from here

*to be continued* :)







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Re: Darkest Of Night... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 02:39:14 AM AEST
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Wow, I can't wait for the second part of this poem. What a marvelous poem. You are a beautiful poet. Marvelous poem!


Re: Darkest Of Night... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:00:41 AM AEST
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wonderful poem and I can relate so much to it
waiting for the next part
Shari


Re: Darkest Of Night... (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:27:50 AM AEST
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i didn't want the sun to find me...perfection in prose.......can't wait for the next part.......


Re: Darkest Of Night... (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 06:08:23 AM AEST
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sad, but wonderfully written.. venkat


Re: Darkest Of Night... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 07:19:44 AM AEST
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Splendid write, Whispers... sad but well done.. looking forward to next part..
Jenni


Re: Darkest Of Night... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 08:56:40 AM AEST
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this is painfully sad and beautiful at the same time, I can relate to this for sure. Each word reached out to me,lovely
michelle


Re: Darkest Of Night... (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 08:16:16 PM AEST
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Ooh I LOVE this!! It just sort of pulled me in... I can't wait to see part 2! Wonderfully written!

~ Moonlit


Re: Darkest Of Night... (User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 02:48:38 AM AEST
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Painfully beautiful! That's all I have to say. Great write!!!




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