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[aid] => Mick
[title] => With A Kiss... (Revision of Forbidden Pleasures)
[time] => 2003-09-03 01:35:00
[hometext] => This is a revised version of "Forbidden Pleasure." I decided to make it into the entire story of what happened that night. Of how I came out to my boyfriend and everything. I like them both, bt this one is alot longer and more detailed...Enjoy
[bodytext] => His eyes read me,
His gaze pierced through me.
Those beautiful orbs,
Caressed the site of me.
He knew what I knew,
He thought what I thought.
He knew my mind screamed ‘NO’
But ‘YES’ was the cry of my heart.
Intuition put its foot down,
Right in the path of common sense.
My head throbbed in panic,
But from my body, he read consent.
His hand touched my hand,
Setting it ablaze.
The other touched my face,
Making me insane.
Desire had dominated,
And two pairs of lips met.
It all started with a kiss.
His lips so soft…
His mouth, so wet.
Thirsting for this moment,
Watering for more…
The way his tongue worked,
I did so adore…
From my face, his hands roamed,
His lips slowly following.
Kissing a trail down my neck,
His passion rapidly growing.
And so we ended up on the floor,
Two bodies entangled.
Our senses in over drive,
Our hair kind of mangled.
He touched me so gently,
And teased with his tongue.
I ached for it all and
Prayed he’d never be done.
Don’t stop, not now.
I hoped he wouldn’t ever.
I could go on,
Just like this forever…
“He’s your friend, I trust you.”
With a kiss…
‘He trusts me, Stop!’
I agreed with my head.
And I explained the memory,
And what he had said.
So we arose from the makeshift bed,
And he agreed he wouldn’t do it again.
His voice was so soothing,
So sincere and discrete,
As he said he respected that,
With a smile so sweet.
I smiled in return,
As he stroked my cheek.
And my eyes wandered
Over his incredible physique…
And in that moment…
He knew what I knew,
He thought what I thought.
He knew my mind screamed ‘NO’
But ‘YES’ was the cry of my heart.
I adored him from afar for just too long,
My dream was coming true.
I was getting what I had wanted.
I WOULD follow through!
The opportunity arose,
My chance was at my fingertips.
I just couldn’t stop myself,
I had to have some more of this!
Mentally, I felt horrible.
But my body felt divine.
And I think I knew in my heart,
That everything would be fine.
The Damage Was Already Done…
His zipper was open…………
We didn’t have sex,
He wasn’t even good.
I came up with everything
That I possibly could…
I decided to tell him,
I really had no choice.
It had taken me a while
To just find my voice.
I explained it all,
Every last detail.
And I didn’t stop,
Until I finished my tale.
And to my surprise,
He forgave me at once!
He pretended that this
Was not a nuisance!
Confused and Guilty,
I apologized repeatedly.
A scream and a break up,
Was what I deserved rightly.
I said that I loved him,
So very much.
And he gave me a hug,
I was relieved to be touched.
All charges dropped,
We all still speak.
How smooth it went over,
I still can’t believe.
“I still trust you, I always will...”
With a kiss…
Why do I feel even worse?
So in love with two,
I think I am cursed.
Don’t know what to do.
With a kiss…
With their kisses…
Two pairs of lips…
Neither of them mine…
Both so divine…
Each set touches mine…
Must I choose?
But I don’t want lose
Either of them!
Feeling so guilty,
Feeling so filthy.
But I’ve been forgiven!!!
So then why do I still feel horrible?
Because they both understand,
With a kiss…
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With A Kiss... (Revision of Forbidden Pleasures)
Contributed by
Crys
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Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
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His eyes read me,
His gaze pierced through me.
Those beautiful orbs,
Caressed the site of me.
He knew what I knew,
He thought what I thought.
He knew my mind screamed ‘NO’
But ‘YES’ was the cry of my heart.
Intuition put its foot down,
Right in the path of common sense.
My head throbbed in panic,
But from my body, he read consent.
His hand touched my hand,
Setting it ablaze.
The other touched my face,
Making me insane.
Desire had dominated,
And two pairs of lips met.
It all started with a kiss.
His lips so soft…
His mouth, so wet.
Thirsting for this moment,
Watering for more…
The way his tongue worked,
I did so adore…
From my face, his hands roamed,
His lips slowly following.
Kissing a trail down my neck,
His passion rapidly growing.
And so we ended up on the floor,
Two bodies entangled.
Our senses in over drive,
Our hair kind of mangled.
He touched me so gently,
And teased with his tongue.
I ached for it all and
Prayed he’d never be done.
Don’t stop, not now.
I hoped he wouldn’t ever.
I could go on,
Just like this forever…
“He’s your friend, I trust you.”
With a kiss…
‘He trusts me, Stop!’
I agreed with my head.
And I explained the memory,
And what he had said.
So we arose from the makeshift bed,
And he agreed he wouldn’t do it again.
His voice was so soothing,
So sincere and discrete,
As he said he respected that,
With a smile so sweet.
I smiled in return,
As he stroked my cheek.
And my eyes wandered
Over his incredible physique…
And in that moment…
He knew what I knew,
He thought what I thought.
He knew my mind screamed ‘NO’
But ‘YES’ was the cry of my heart.
I adored him from afar for just too long,
My dream was coming true.
I was getting what I had wanted.
I WOULD follow through!
The opportunity arose,
My chance was at my fingertips.
I just couldn’t stop myself,
I had to have some more of this!
Mentally, I felt horrible.
But my body felt divine.
And I think I knew in my heart,
That everything would be fine.
The Damage Was Already Done…
His zipper was open…………
We didn’t have sex,
He wasn’t even good.
I came up with everything
That I possibly could…
I decided to tell him,
I really had no choice.
It had taken me a while
To just find my voice.
I explained it all,
Every last detail.
And I didn’t stop,
Until I finished my tale.
And to my surprise,
He forgave me at once!
He pretended that this
Was not a nuisance!
Confused and Guilty,
I apologized repeatedly.
A scream and a break up,
Was what I deserved rightly.
I said that I loved him,
So very much.
And he gave me a hug,
I was relieved to be touched.
All charges dropped,
We all still speak.
How smooth it went over,
I still can’t believe.
“I still trust you, I always will...”
With a kiss…
Why do I feel even worse?
So in love with two,
I think I am cursed.
Don’t know what to do.
With a kiss…
With their kisses…
Two pairs of lips…
Neither of them mine…
Both so divine…
Each set touches mine…
Must I choose?
But I don’t want lose
Either of them!
Feeling so guilty,
Feeling so filthy.
But I’ve been forgiven!!!
So then why do I still feel horrible?
Because they both understand,
With a kiss…
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Crys
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Re: With A Kiss... (Revision of Forbidden Pleasures)
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 03:23:36 AM AEST
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thank you for the rest of the story........
it's an emotional turmoil when in love with two at the same juncture in life........especially when they understand with a kiss.....i wish you peace........... |
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Re: With A Kiss... (Revision of Forbidden Pleasures)
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 04:28:36 AM AEST
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| If he is a real friend to your boy friend, knowing pretty well, he should have avoided that situation.. any way..you better forget it and feel peace.. venkat |
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Re: With A Kiss... (Revision of Forbidden Pleasures)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 05:19:16 AM AEST
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| Man that reminded of a situation I've been in, but I was drunk with woman who was with my best friend. I was so drunk that I thought she was this other woman that I was in love with, but I'm not going into that. Sorry rambling. Thank you for posting the second part of your poem. All together it's a beautiful epic tale of passion, mistakes made, and true forgiveness. Simply beautiful! |
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Re: With A Kiss... (Revision of Forbidden Pleasures)
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by Crys on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 05:46:28 AM AEST
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Thank you all so much for your comments. You know, for the past couple days, my confussion has given me migrains. Not pleasant, that's for sure. I love my boyfriend and I would never leave him for another guy... But I really really like this guy. And I thought for a while that the reason my boyfriend forgave me was because he didn't really understand. He blamed himself for not satisfying me and he blamed my friend for putting the moves on me. But I told him flat out last night that it was my fault too, because I went along with it. I told him that I honestly like him. And you know what he said?? He told me that he wasn't the type to tell me who I could and couldn't be friends with and that if I was to be around him, not to do it in his pressence. He said I was forgiven because he loved me and he knew I loved him. I'm still feeling so incredibly guilty and filthy. Why did they both have to understand and close it all with a kiss? Why do they both have to be so passionate and desirable?
Well, I'm glad you all enjoyed this... It took me forever to write, but I think that writing this is actually what got rid of my migrains. Thank you once again...
*~*Crys*~*
Guilty...Filthy...With A Kiss... |
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Re: With A Kiss... (Revision of Forbidden Pleasures)
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 06:50:44 AM AEST
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This was incredibly touching...enjoyed it. I hope you find peace and self forgiveness..
Jenni |
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Re: With A Kiss... (Revision of Forbidden Pleasures)
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by Crys on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 10:18:32 AM AEST
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Truth is, they're not friends, Venkat. My boyfriend didn't like him way before this incident. Now he's even less fond of him. I can't say I don't blame him though... Self forgiveness is still al ittle ways off, but I was relieved to be forgiven by my love...
*~*Crys*~* |
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Re: With A Kiss... (Revision of Forbidden Pleasures)
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by a_bear on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:07:09 AM AEST
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| don't know what to say...did they didn't they? I've read it over and over..reading too fast maybe...I'll read it again. |
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