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Array ( [sid] => 2263 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I want to be in love [time] => 2002-08-14 07:01:25 [hometext] => Oh my I can't believe I just submitted this poem but it's how I really feel I dunno what to say...maybe I'm just crazy to feel this way coz everyone says I'm too young to know what true love is well I don't think that is true personally. [bodytext] => There's something missing in my heart
Something that's never been there since the start
Everyday visions come to my head of what I want to feel
How I want to express feelings that are not yet real
I want to be in love it's hard to explain
These feelings bring me so much pain
and it's driving me completely insane
I want to find somebody who will treat me right
Someone who will never lie or pick a fight
Someone who I can be with all the time
Who will make my heart sing a rhyme
I feel like I need someone here with me
Someone who will set me free
I want to look in someone's eyes
and realize that there are no lies
How much longer must I wait
till I find someone I can actually date
I'm sick and tired of dreaming my life away
I want to be in love on this very day [comments] => 5 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Sweetie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
I want to be in love

Contributed by Sweetie on Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 07:01:25 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



There's something missing in my heart
Something that's never been there since the start
Everyday visions come to my head of what I want to feel
How I want to express feelings that are not yet real
I want to be in love it's hard to explain
These feelings bring me so much pain
and it's driving me completely insane
I want to find somebody who will treat me right
Someone who will never lie or pick a fight
Someone who I can be with all the time
Who will make my heart sing a rhyme
I feel like I need someone here with me
Someone who will set me free
I want to look in someone's eyes
and realize that there are no lies
How much longer must I wait
till I find someone I can actually date
I'm sick and tired of dreaming my life away
I want to be in love on this very day




Copyright © Sweetie ... [ 2002-08-14 07:01:25]
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Re: I want to be in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 07:06:03 AM AEST
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A person is never too young to know what love is. However....what you are seeking can be found without 'dating'...the feelings you expressed here can be found in the truest of friends....


Re: I want to be in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 11:27:10 AM AEST
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Hey Sweetie...you are not too young... I fell in love when I was 11....and I'm married to that man now for 23 years and 5 months.. He made me feel those things you mentioned at that age... So..al the best to you....
Jenni


Re: I want to be in love (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 09:09:36 PM AEST
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your never too young to experience the feelings of love.....I can remember thinking similar thoughts too, but be patient . Love is the most wonderful feeling in the world, it can also hurt like hell!!!!..be prepared.

Love
Penny


Re: I want to be in love (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 07:38:17 AM AEST
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never to young or old to love someone, or be heart broke be prepared for both and remember the best love you can have is one thats based on truth and understanding, such a tender age when the world throws you the curves of life so keep your head up and your heart light and you will find your prince one day!


Re: I want to be in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Panther_1978 on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:27:32 PM AEST
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Hello Sweetie,

You can never be young to love someone! I thought the same things as you do... I thought that I was going to be like 30 before I met a lady but I'm 24 and had my first love... but it didn't and it hurt like hell! But great write and thanks for sharing

Panther





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