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Array ( [sid] => 22612 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Obsidian Nemesis [time] => 2003-09-01 23:05:00 [hometext] => Please read this, my twin Riki helped me title it, actually she did title it, lol, but i wrote the rest, lol, it's kind of a weird poem but it's one of my few poems that i actually like so, anyway, leave feedback, thanx! [bodytext] => My mind to bend, my soul to bind
My heart to break, my bones to grind
My sanity to lose, my darkness to shine
To live or die, I can’t decide
Sanity may be found, but it isn’t mine
To move ahead, or fall behind
To reveal my lies, or in darkness hide
My tears to fall, my tears to dry
The choices in life are no longer mine
No longer am I in control of my life
The path I’ve walked, it sucked me in
To live in goodness or live in sin
Pushed and shoved by invisible hands
Through this morbid, fantasy land
The sun shines darkness, running rivers all blood red
The dying ones are being born, the living ones are dead
The ones never knowing hunger are the only ones ever fed
Speaking is just thinking, and thoughts are always said
My heart to love, my heart to hate
My soul to keep my soul to take
No longer the master of my fate
Never able to turn away
Forced along the journey
Approaching hell’s black gate
To walk forward or to walk back
Through the snow of charcoal black
Over the bridge or through the lake
To stand firm or to break
To choose not to choose
Or not to choose at all
It doesn’t matter anymore
I’m too far down to fall
I walk this morbid yellow brick road
With bricks of shiny black
With skies of red and trees of gray
Hands shackled behind my back
Demons leading me on each side
One in front and one behind
Prisoner of hell forevermore
My muscles so tired, my feet so sore
Words are thought
thoughts are words
I can’t yell for help outside this world
I look back on the life I left behind
Marching onward slowly,
Through this place they’ll never find.

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Obsidian Nemesis

Contributed by blackfire9786 on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



My mind to bend, my soul to bind
My heart to break, my bones to grind
My sanity to lose, my darkness to shine
To live or die, I can’t decide
Sanity may be found, but it isn’t mine
To move ahead, or fall behind
To reveal my lies, or in darkness hide
My tears to fall, my tears to dry
The choices in life are no longer mine
No longer am I in control of my life
The path I’ve walked, it sucked me in
To live in goodness or live in sin
Pushed and shoved by invisible hands
Through this morbid, fantasy land
The sun shines darkness, running rivers all blood red
The dying ones are being born, the living ones are dead
The ones never knowing hunger are the only ones ever fed
Speaking is just thinking, and thoughts are always said
My heart to love, my heart to hate
My soul to keep my soul to take
No longer the master of my fate
Never able to turn away
Forced along the journey
Approaching hell’s black gate
To walk forward or to walk back
Through the snow of charcoal black
Over the bridge or through the lake
To stand firm or to break
To choose not to choose
Or not to choose at all
It doesn’t matter anymore
I’m too far down to fall
I walk this morbid yellow brick road
With bricks of shiny black
With skies of red and trees of gray
Hands shackled behind my back
Demons leading me on each side
One in front and one behind
Prisoner of hell forevermore
My muscles so tired, my feet so sore
Words are thought
thoughts are words
I can’t yell for help outside this world
I look back on the life I left behind
Marching onward slowly,
Through this place they’ll never find.

My Obsidian Nemesis.




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Re: Obsidian Nemesis (User Rating: 1 )
by VampiricSuccubus on Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 12:57:30 AM AEST
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Wow... deep, dark, and truely amazing, I've seen places like this in my dreams, or maybe on a postcard (just kidding) this poem really rocks


Re: Obsidian Nemesis (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 01:38:41 AM AEST
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Awesome. Great write!


Re: Obsidian Nemesis (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 02:45:25 AM AEST
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U and you twin did great!
Very creative!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emystar


Re: Obsidian Nemesis (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 01:35:20 PM AEST
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this is great. i loved it!




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