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will never save the little girl
from the pillar she was hurled
all the insults have unfurled
her heart knotted up like a burl
before swine she's the casted pearl
her wins are so surreal
in a fetal she will curl
if she had a penny for every whirl
she'd be a rich little girl
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Casted Pearl

Contributed by jaeann on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

All the vices in the world
will never save the little girl
from the pillar she was hurled
all the insults have unfurled
her heart knotted up like a burl
before swine she's the casted pearl
her wins are so surreal
in a fetal she will curl
if she had a penny for every whirl
she'd be a rich little girl
in someone else's world.

Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-09-01 01:35:00]
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Re: Casted Pearl (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 01:43:21 AM AEST
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great write
Shari

Re: Casted Pearl (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 02:03:12 AM AEST
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Sad, but well written....
Jenni

Re: Casted Pearl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 02:54:39 AM AEST
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I simply love reading your poems.So much heart,but so much pain.Your poems can truly be considered great.

Re: Casted Pearl (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:18:52 AM AEST
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very sad..it is well written..venkat

Re: Casted Pearl (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:25:48 AM AEST
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I can relate.
Good work!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy

Re: Casted Pearl (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:16:34 PM AEST
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i liked this the rhyming, the sadness, the bitterness. It could have been a bit longer lol but I say that a lot. Great poem and thnx for your comments on mine.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Casted Pearl (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 10:08:19 PM AEST
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you always have me in wonder of you with your writing, conjuring an image from your
words, I like that. good work, Crow

Re: Casted Pearl (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 12:08:45 AM AEST
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such saddness and pain. i don't know what to say but awesome write. this is defined to me tha you feel as if the girl is societies outcast. just make sure not to be afraid to break the barrier you so painstalkingly build without realizing it!!!

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