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buttons and bows a long ago myth.

Tortured spirit, twisted and black,
everything nice is not to be.

Late in the night she rises again,
filling a need, terror thrives.

Daddy`s little girl searches the dreams,
no sugar and spice, indidious laugh.

The beconing call, from a venomous lair.
evil comes home to haunt the birth... Crow. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 344 [topic] => 13 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Daddy`s Little Girl

Contributed by crow on Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Daddy`s little girl has come home to rest,
buttons and bows a long ago myth.

Tortured spirit, twisted and black,
everything nice is not to be.

Late in the night she rises again,
filling a need, terror thrives.

Daddy`s little girl searches the dreams,
no sugar and spice, indidious laugh.

The beconing call, from a venomous lair.
evil comes home to haunt the birth... Crow.

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-08-31 16:25:00]
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Re: Daddy`s Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 04:42:08 PM AEST
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Crow, as you know I can't read "spookiness"
Gives me goosepimples and uneasiness.
I didn't find this dark as much as cold...
Cold hard facts,tortured spirit, love lacks.

Oh, Yes Crow, I hear you, and it has so many meanings to me
No one will see what I see..
Everyone will find a different meaning to be...

I loved It. Crow....you write so few words
and yet you say it all. Sign of high intelligence.
I love the "venomous Lair"
That in itself gave me quite a scare!
Wonderful!
lovingcritters
Connie

Re: Daddy`s Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 05:43:00 PM AEST
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it's dark.........menacing and unforgiving.......a feel like i'm waiting for his darkness now to make it as scary as mine was......
evil comes home to haunt the birth.........yes!!!

Re: Daddy`s Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by painted_echos on Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 05:43:57 PM AEST
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yes, it is dark. as well it is beautiful.

Re: Daddy`s Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 07:14:02 PM AEST
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My friend once again you use so few words to haunt the depths of the soul

Shari

Re: Daddy`s Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 31st August 2003 @ 09:30:38 PM AEST
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes this is dark and has its own beauty hanging in there as well you captivated me once again.
michelle

Re: Daddy`s Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 03:06:25 AM AEST
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Classic dark,sortta like those old silent horror flicks.Few words,but still frightening.

Re: Daddy`s Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 05:33:13 AM AEST
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I reada lot of books...all kinds..and this would be perfect between the covers of a very deep and dark secretive write.I know I would be kept and held captive by your words.You excel in all you do...in so few drops of ink. :)BRAVO!!

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