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Array ( [sid] => 22495 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => SeeinG ReD - - > [time] => 2003-08-30 05:45:00 [hometext] => ** This poem isnt meant for any exact person. Its just what I'm feeling in general** [bodytext] => Wash away my thoughts with empty tears,
drink until the regret is almost gone,
forget my morals, abuse my fears,
and never carry on,
forget my future, i have no past,
does it matter anymore,
losing hope, only too fast,
wings too battered to soar,
you thought you knew me, you didnt know,
it was so dark inside,
i prayed youd save me,youd let me go,
and now theres no where to hide,
my soul is battered, mind abused,
so much you never knew,
torn and broken, hurt and bruised,
things i cannot say to you,
you were so proud, without a doubt,
that i would always be okay,
too bad you never knew about,
how soon i would waste away,
too bad you simply couldnt see,
each scar i cut for you,
why did you make life hell for me,
what did i ever do,
was it because i wasnt good enough,
because i cant do anything right,
what was it that made living with me so tough,
every word was just a fight,
burning hate inside of me,
a fire in my soul,
flames aching to be set free,
and take back the life you stole,
hate, pain, loneliness and lies,
running through my head,
everything i see i despise,
youve got me seeing red. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Chanti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
SeeinG ReD - - >

Contributed by Chanti on Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 05:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Wash away my thoughts with empty tears,
drink until the regret is almost gone,
forget my morals, abuse my fears,
and never carry on,
forget my future, i have no past,
does it matter anymore,
losing hope, only too fast,
wings too battered to soar,
you thought you knew me, you didnt know,
it was so dark inside,
i prayed youd save me,youd let me go,
and now theres no where to hide,
my soul is battered, mind abused,
so much you never knew,
torn and broken, hurt and bruised,
things i cannot say to you,
you were so proud, without a doubt,
that i would always be okay,
too bad you never knew about,
how soon i would waste away,
too bad you simply couldnt see,
each scar i cut for you,
why did you make life hell for me,
what did i ever do,
was it because i wasnt good enough,
because i cant do anything right,
what was it that made living with me so tough,
every word was just a fight,
burning hate inside of me,
a fire in my soul,
flames aching to be set free,
and take back the life you stole,
hate, pain, loneliness and lies,
running through my head,
everything i see i despise,
youve got me seeing red.




Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2003-08-30 05:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: SeeinG ReD - - > (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 02:54:24 PM AEST
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wow this was so good you've described a lot how I feel this was very wel l written and as always you draw the reader into the poem. I'm glad that someone didn't do this to you.

Peace,
Bobo (Joel)




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