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Array ( [sid] => 22445 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Their Hearts' December [time] => 2003-08-28 19:45:00 [hometext] => In the end, true love will conquer all. [bodytext] => On a cold summer's night
A lonely lovers' fight
Breaks the silence
He just wants to be heard
She needs to be assured
No one's convinced

And as her tear falls
She pretends to stand tall
She knows he's becoming her downfall

And if nobody ever says "I'm sorry"
The things he says become her bedtime story
And if he won't stand up straight and be a man
She'll start to wonder if she should have ran
He can't take it anymore
Feels like she's been here before
How did a perfect love become a war?

Too many promises
Bind her, making her his
She can't let go
The endless frustration
Knows no consolation
Does her love show?

And as his words wound
He's becoming immune
To the pain she feels but it's too soon

And if she can't prove what he needs to be shown
Someone might be carving their names into stone
And if she refuses to swallow her pride
His simple needs will never be satisfied
They both expect sympathy
And they simply can't agree
It seems she's not who he wants her to be

So much to remember
It's their hearts' December
And they're so far
Just trying to get by
So much stress underlies
The way they are

Poetry's her thing
To him, words mean nothing
But yet she could be his everything

'Cause once upon a time this boy fell in love
Surrounded her with it, below and above
Nothing's over yet if they learn how to live
Understand a little more and just forgive
Then true love could reach new heights
And never blink out like a light
They'll get past this and make a change tonight [comments] => 5 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Their Hearts' December

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 07:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



On a cold summer's night
A lonely lovers' fight
Breaks the silence
He just wants to be heard
She needs to be assured
No one's convinced

And as her tear falls
She pretends to stand tall
She knows he's becoming her downfall

And if nobody ever says "I'm sorry"
The things he says become her bedtime story
And if he won't stand up straight and be a man
She'll start to wonder if she should have ran
He can't take it anymore
Feels like she's been here before
How did a perfect love become a war?

Too many promises
Bind her, making her his
She can't let go
The endless frustration
Knows no consolation
Does her love show?

And as his words wound
He's becoming immune
To the pain she feels but it's too soon

And if she can't prove what he needs to be shown
Someone might be carving their names into stone
And if she refuses to swallow her pride
His simple needs will never be satisfied
They both expect sympathy
And they simply can't agree
It seems she's not who he wants her to be

So much to remember
It's their hearts' December
And they're so far
Just trying to get by
So much stress underlies
The way they are

Poetry's her thing
To him, words mean nothing
But yet she could be his everything

'Cause once upon a time this boy fell in love
Surrounded her with it, below and above
Nothing's over yet if they learn how to live
Understand a little more and just forgive
Then true love could reach new heights
And never blink out like a light
They'll get past this and make a change tonight




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-08-28 19:45:00]
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Re: Their Hearts' December (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 10:04:43 PM AEST
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*Poetry's her thing
To him, words mean nothing
But yet she could be his everything*

Sadly beautiful! I liked the title a lot. Good read!
Saira



Re: Their Hearts' December (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 10:48:19 PM AEST
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very moving write, much love and hugs nessa


Re: Their Hearts' December (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 11:45:20 PM AEST
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this is awesome Moonlit. great job!


Re: Their Hearts' December (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 05:45:53 AM AEST
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oh wow....this is lovely....so simply sad and longing.....poetry's her thing.....they try so hard but they never truly get it.....not completely......awesome write!!!!!


Re: Their Hearts' December (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Friday, 29th August 2003 @ 06:55:40 AM AEST
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Love it!
It's very moving!




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