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Array ( [sid] => 22406 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => All Alone [time] => 2003-08-27 15:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => All alone the broadening sky,
under it every night I will lie.
Scratching claw and grip the rail,
everyday my living hell.
Oh! Cherubs you know I tried,
I know how hard I tried.
Hey I'd like to daze away to a
place like no one has known
in a state of mind I could call mine
that only I could own
where I could hum a tune with you anytime
I choose and then there is no such thing as time
where I can feel no pain just calm and sane
what a place for us to find?
Now you see they're watching everything I say
why won't they let me be?
why am I even here?
Now in my corner I got the ceiling in my eyes
arms holding up my knees
and rocking back and forth is my life
I didn't mean to feel this way
when I walked into the door,
then they ripped away my memories
and I can't remember who I was before
and I only wanted to be with you and free. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 21 [informant] => damien [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

All Alone

Contributed by damien on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

All alone the broadening sky,
under it every night I will lie.
Scratching claw and grip the rail,
everyday my living hell.
Oh! Cherubs you know I tried,
I know how hard I tried.
Hey I'd like to daze away to a
place like no one has known
in a state of mind I could call mine
that only I could own
where I could hum a tune with you anytime
I choose and then there is no such thing as time
where I can feel no pain just calm and sane
what a place for us to find?
Now you see they're watching everything I say
why won't they let me be?
why am I even here?
Now in my corner I got the ceiling in my eyes
arms holding up my knees
and rocking back and forth is my life
I didn't mean to feel this way
when I walked into the door,
then they ripped away my memories
and I can't remember who I was before
and I only wanted to be with you and free.

Copyright © damien ... [ 2003-08-27 15:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: All Alone (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 08:30:47 PM AEST
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A very very good write. I liked it. Ivy

Re: All Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 07:13:54 PM AEST
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This is exquisite! I've never read anything quite like it! Keep 'em coming.

~ Moonlit

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