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like water that flows away from the beach sand.
Like the snow that melts in the heat,
like a spirit that evaporates within no time.
This is so sudden and difficult to understand,
But with u i will always stand.
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Slipping Away

Contributed by ivy on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Slipping away like sand from one's hand,
like water that flows away from the beach sand.
Like the snow that melts in the heat,
like a spirit that evaporates within no time.
This is so sudden and difficult to understand,
But with u i will always stand.

Copyright © ivy ... [ 2003-08-27 13:05:00]
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Re: Slipping Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Damien on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 01:42:14 PM AEST
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As long as you are right nothing can go wrong for a long time, sometimes things happen for which you don't find answers or explanations, but don't let them get you down, cause as they say "every cloud has a silver lining". :) - Damien

Re: Slipping Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Damien on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 01:42:34 PM AEST
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As long as you are right nothing can go wrong for a long time, sometimes things happen for which you don't find answers or explanations, but don't let them get you down, cause as they say "every cloud has a silver lining". :) - Danny

Re: Slipping Away (User Rating: 1 )
by soul_je on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 02:53:35 PM AEST
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as the chinese saying goes " beetles are not only one, an so as flowers ". It means that there will always be a person out there for you. you wrote a very nice poem here

Re: Slipping Away (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 08:23:25 PM AEST
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Thanx.

Re: Slipping Away (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 08:24:53 PM AEST
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Thanx. Ivy

Re: Slipping Away (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 08:25:10 PM AEST
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Thanx. Ivy

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