Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 14:30:38 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 22400 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Said I Love You [time] => 2003-08-27 09:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's crazy to see just what you've done
how'd I make it this far
without using my gun
to put a hole in my head
to kill the hole in my heart
I love you so much
so you tear me apart
I said I love you so much
but I hate you too
you like to play with my head
guess it's a game to you
I'll only be in your life for a little while
just long enough to make you smile
cause soon the thrill will fade
and soon I'll be replaced
with some poor sole out there
who'll give you all of them
never knowing it's not enough
to keep you happy in the end
but it's all about you
and what you want and when
true love you throw away
cause you'd rather play again
I did the best I could
but still you wanted more
took all the love I had
then showed me to the door
seems attention is your drug of choice
to maintain some sort of high
be careful you might overdose
and nobody will cry. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 32 [informant] => kori31 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I Said I Love You

Contributed by kori31 on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

It's crazy to see just what you've done
how'd I make it this far
without using my gun
to put a hole in my head
to kill the hole in my heart
I love you so much
so you tear me apart
I said I love you so much
but I hate you too
you like to play with my head
guess it's a game to you
I'll only be in your life for a little while
just long enough to make you smile
cause soon the thrill will fade
and soon I'll be replaced
with some poor sole out there
who'll give you all of them
never knowing it's not enough
to keep you happy in the end
but it's all about you
and what you want and when
true love you throw away
cause you'd rather play again
I did the best I could
but still you wanted more
took all the love I had
then showed me to the door
seems attention is your drug of choice
to maintain some sort of high
be careful you might overdose
and nobody will cry.

Copyright © kori31 ... [ 2003-08-27 09:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: I Said I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 10:09:38 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Such a realistic poem on some people and how they threat others in the name of love. This was an excellent poem and hope you haven't gone through this.
~ Emma ~

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com