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Array ( [sid] => 22397 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Reflection [time] => 2003-08-27 07:45:00 [hometext] => Something i wrote whilst on holiday... [bodytext] => Brake all the mirrors,
I can´t bare to see that face,
Shut all the curtains, turn off all the lights,
No one can see if it´s dark in this place.

If we´re ever at a river or the like,
Send ripples through the calm,
Don´t let the natural distortion of my being
Be what disturbs the tranquil charm.

Black out all the roads and walls,
My shadow´s just another part of this curse.
If you ever catch me with a shard of broken window in my hand,
Please, no one call a nurse.

This reflection haunts my memories,
My dreams are tainted too,
But don´t try to fix me,
There is nothing you can do. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 32 [informant] => M [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Reflection

Contributed by M on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 07:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Brake all the mirrors,
I can´t bare to see that face,
Shut all the curtains, turn off all the lights,
No one can see if it´s dark in this place.

If we´re ever at a river or the like,
Send ripples through the calm,
Don´t let the natural distortion of my being
Be what disturbs the tranquil charm.

Black out all the roads and walls,
My shadow´s just another part of this curse.
If you ever catch me with a shard of broken window in my hand,
Please, no one call a nurse.

This reflection haunts my memories,
My dreams are tainted too,
But don´t try to fix me,
There is nothing you can do.

Copyright Â© M ... [ 2003-08-27 07:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 08:08:56 PM AEST
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baby...i'm always here...if i could take your tears and cry them for you, i would, and if i could take your pain, and carry it as my own, i would...i love you, i'm always here, xxx

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Wednesday, 27th August 2003 @ 09:44:20 PM AEST
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what can i say after that? only that im here for you too, emily, i always have been, always will be. Im thinking of you hun..
x_x_x

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 01:35:57 AM AEST
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dearest emily, big hugs n' lotsa love, nessa xx

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 05:22:27 AM AEST
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This was very well written and I liked the rhyme scheme. I wish you and Lucie didn't have to feel so much pain, but to know I am a part of that it kills me. I wish I could take it all away... I really mean that.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 10:57:09 PM AEST
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This is one of the most beautiful poems I've read. Your true feelings bleed through your words like wine. Pain never lasts forever.

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