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[aid] => mick
[title] => Wounds
[time] => 2003-08-23 23:25:00
[hometext] => A short poem,
I wonder if we heal.
[bodytext] => Wounds, how much can our hearts take,
is there room for one more disaster
enough strength for one more love lost.
Does time heal? are hearts just salved
over by previous tears lying in wait
to break open and bleed.
Are we mended, when we welcome the dark,
the ouiet, the urgency to be alone.
Wounds, a name or reference can rip
them open again.
I have heard be careful what you say,
it could be another man`s heartache.
How do we pad ourselves to face each day.
Crow
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => Lifepoems
)
Wounds
Contributed by
crow
on
Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Wounds, how much can our hearts take,
is there room for one more disaster
enough strength for one more love lost.
Does time heal? are hearts just salved
over by previous tears lying in wait
to break open and bleed.
Are we mended, when we welcome the dark,
the ouiet, the urgency to be alone.
Wounds, a name or reference can rip
them open again.
I have heard be careful what you say,
it could be another man`s heartache.
How do we pad ourselves to face each day.
Crow
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Re: Wounds
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 02:50:15 AM AEST
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heartwrenching, Crow....in answer I would say, we never heal, Crow....we adjust as we continue on our way!
I wish we could pad ourselves, especially our hearts....we soon learn to have thick skin....but can't let our hearts grow grim....
Each day is a test Crow of our resilency...
For in each day that we live.....there will be another test for you and me.....but one nice thing we can conclude.....with each one we are alittle stronger to face the others we can't elude!
Warm love,
Wonderful poetry, Crow
Connie Sue |
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Re: Wounds
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 02:58:26 AM AEST
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Very touching again you took me to another place..brought tears to my eyes...
Shari |
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Re: Wounds
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 02:59:16 AM AEST
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Very touching again you took me to another place..brought tears to my eyes...
Shari |
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Re: Wounds
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 02:59:26 AM AEST
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Very touching again you took me to another place..brought tears to my eyes...
Shari |
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Re: Wounds
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by PoloRM on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 07:42:51 AM AEST
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very thoughtful write. Enjoyed it.
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Time is a healer yes indeed
Depending on how deep is the seed
Some wounds may never mend
Some we cannot comprehend
Just leave them behind
And move along my friend. |
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Re: Wounds
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 11:16:42 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem, i do believe we heal and grow from these things that hurt, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Wounds
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 05:24:44 AM AEST
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| i wish i were mended when the darkness knocks......some things heal....some things fester.....i pray every day for healing |
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Re: Wounds
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by Crow on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 06:05:07 AM AEST
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i wish the best for you, i know this feeling.
thank you for taking a peek. Crow |
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Re: Wounds
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 05:09:42 AM AEST
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My wounds are still apparent and easily accessed for re-opening.But I have to throw back at you what you had once told me about two beasts inside and and how its only the one you feed that wins ;)
Excellent write my friend((huggers)) |
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Re: Wounds
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by HedderMarie on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 07:27:56 PM AEST
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Crow-
Wonderful, wonderful...I truly understand what you are saying in this poem. The question is how much can our hearts take?...and you've mastered all those questions beautifully. Wonderful and powerful poem. Great job!
-Hedder Marie |
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