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Array ( [sid] => 22254 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2003-08-23 12:45:00 [hometext] => You have to keep in mind the first sentence all the way to the last few. comments are appreciated [bodytext] => I've been pushed to the edge and I am about to fall over I amsick of what feelings can be no longer do I try to be happy I could give a ***** if I die today or about what other forms of harm that may come my way I don't give a ***** about grades or records on how I behave It's nobody's business stay the ***** out of my business I don't know what I really want my past has my future to haunt my future don't look to good from where I am standing all those damn people to over demanding It's all my business and please don't correct me if there is someting i miss just sit there don't mistake me for something Im not or ill get *****' more ***** and oh yes there is you come straight out of the blue and you expect me to give a ***** about you?well I am sick of not only you but everything you have to say too. and stay out of my business to all of you I say the same it's my life so leave me and I'll have one less pain I still don't know what I want anymore sadness just another timless bore shows up goes away just sit and have to pray it won't ***** have to stay what's up with peoples attitudes? Don't it bother them to be rude to exclude? What's up with your ***** attitude never had a problem with you infact hardly even spoke to you Even though everything seems alright why must we still ***** and fight why must I stay up late at night to listen to your garbage and there i go slipped over the edge.
There ain't answers to all of my questionsbut no fear i have no more worries to be sloved or to be found my lifes over I've hit the ground. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 6 [informant] => k8til_E [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
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Contributed by k8til_E on Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I've been pushed to the edge and I am about to fall over I amsick of what feelings can be no longer do I try to be happy I could give a ***** if I die today or about what other forms of harm that may come my way I don't give a ***** about grades or records on how I behave It's nobody's business stay the ***** out of my business I don't know what I really want my past has my future to haunt my future don't look to good from where I am standing all those damn people to over demanding It's all my business and please don't correct me if there is someting i miss just sit there don't mistake me for something Im not or ill get *****' more ***** and oh yes there is you come straight out of the blue and you expect me to give a ***** about you?well I am sick of not only you but everything you have to say too. and stay out of my business to all of you I say the same it's my life so leave me and I'll have one less pain I still don't know what I want anymore sadness just another timless bore shows up goes away just sit and have to pray it won't ***** have to stay what's up with peoples attitudes? Don't it bother them to be rude to exclude? What's up with your ***** attitude never had a problem with you infact hardly even spoke to you Even though everything seems alright why must we still ***** and fight why must I stay up late at night to listen to your garbage and there i go slipped over the edge.
There ain't answers to all of my questionsbut no fear i have no more worries to be sloved or to be found my lifes over I've hit the ground.




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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by crimson_purity on Saturday, 23rd August 2003 @ 08:48:09 PM AEST
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I really felt the raw emotion, the structure is really interesting and just adds to the overall power of the piece, I really enjoyed it.




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