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Array ( [sid] => 22183 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rain [time] => 2003-08-21 16:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sitting in my room, alone
Admiring the sky in this rainy night
The edge of my wall
Crying the drops of your existence
The window clouded,
Due to the warm breathe of my love
Suffering, the pain of your decision!

I turned watching my gray sky
Regarding the stars that I created
From the smoke of my cigarette

I saw you!
Unclouding your way
Piercing the silence of this quite color
Like a river
That owns no will to change his way
His destiny, my love

You unleashed through the river of your way
The light of a fairy hidden in the glass
Hidden inside my heart
To shine for me

The door cracks open!
I heard the wind blowing
And saw lightning! I felt my end!

I realized it was a fantasy
I looked around
I saw you!
The fairy was you
Your picture was reflected
Over the mirrors of my imagination
To depict your mysteries
To blind my heart
With the best ever excited, the vision

To send me free
With every rain drop
Streaming down my window
On this rainy night!
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 39 [informant] => cant-skate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Rain

Contributed by cant-skate on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Sitting in my room, alone
Admiring the sky in this rainy night
The edge of my wall
Crying the drops of your existence
The window clouded,
Due to the warm breathe of my love
Suffering, the pain of your decision!

I turned watching my gray sky
Regarding the stars that I created
From the smoke of my cigarette

I saw you!
Unclouding your way
Piercing the silence of this quite color
Like a river
That owns no will to change his way
His destiny, my love

You unleashed through the river of your way
The light of a fairy hidden in the glass
Hidden inside my heart
To shine for me

The door cracks open!
I heard the wind blowing
And saw lightning! I felt my end!

I realized it was a fantasy
I looked around
I saw you!
The fairy was you
Your picture was reflected
Over the mirrors of my imagination
To depict your mysteries
To blind my heart
With the best ever excited, the vision

To send me free
With every rain drop
Streaming down my window
On this rainy night!




Copyright © cant-skate ... [ 2003-08-21 16:45:00]
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Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by thelmalou on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 07:13:03 PM AEST
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Sad but beautiful. Thelma


Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 08:22:20 PM AEST
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the utter turmoil of no longer being ones' object of desire.......that sweet tearing pain.....really great work......as always!!!!




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