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Lord I pray you`ll give to me
Words to reach far and wide
Across the sea to shining sea
Because many tears are cried

If words could stop suffering
For children who are abused
Words of comfort I may bring
To these children so confused

So many young girls molested
By the ones they grew to love
On my shoulders it has rested
With his guidance from above

Words to all the perpetrators
You disgrace your fellow men
As you face our great creator
Then you`ll pay for your sins

When once a trust is broken
Things can never be the same
A soft word can`t be spoken
You`re relationship is maimed

A memory is not wiped away
It is in her heart forever more
She won`t forget the awful day
Till up in Heaven with the Lord
Written By Thelma Shutters (c) 8-19-03
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UNTIL IN HEAVEN

Contributed by thelmalou on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

UNTIL IN HEAVEN
Lord I pray you`ll give to me
Words to reach far and wide
Across the sea to shining sea
Because many tears are cried

If words could stop suffering
For children who are abused
Words of comfort I may bring
To these children so confused

So many young girls molested
By the ones they grew to love
On my shoulders it has rested
With his guidance from above

Words to all the perpetrators
You disgrace your fellow men
As you face our great creator
Then you`ll pay for your sins

When once a trust is broken
Things can never be the same
A soft word can`t be spoken
You`re relationship is maimed

A memory is not wiped away
It is in her heart forever more
She won`t forget the awful day
Till up in Heaven with the Lord
Written By Thelma Shutters (c) 8-19-03

Copyright © thelmalou ... [ 2003-08-21 15:25:00]
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Re: UNTIL IN HEAVEN (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 03:32:25 PM AEST
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great poem! hard topic but good write

Re: UNTIL IN HEAVEN (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 07:10:13 PM AEST
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wonderful and caring poem. If you like children, I like you.

Re: UNTIL IN HEAVEN (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 08:10:30 PM AEST
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thank you for the touching praise......when at first you feel so alone.....then you realize you are not.....then the anger has grows.........

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