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My past, my present and my fate
Have all been taken away from me
To this I know not how to relate

The ground on which I chose to stand
The foundation on which my life was based
I have built without a helping hand
But now the truth has been erased

Spiraling into the abyss below
I need something to cling to, to keep me afloat
Seems to be nothing here that I know
There must be some sort of reality
Just a fraction of truth to use as a boat

Weightless and suspended in time
Is this how I am forever doomed to be
Lost in this pit, scared and alone
I cry out “Someone please help me!”
My screams are to no avail though
With every turn I loose myself
I know not where to go
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What Now

Contributed by sandeye75 on Tuesday, 13th August 2002 @ 10:04:51 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

All the things I had known to be
My past, my present and my fate
Have all been taken away from me
To this I know not how to relate

The ground on which I chose to stand
The foundation on which my life was based
I have built without a helping hand
But now the truth has been erased

Spiraling into the abyss below
I need something to cling to, to keep me afloat
Seems to be nothing here that I know
There must be some sort of reality
Just a fraction of truth to use as a boat

Weightless and suspended in time
Is this how I am forever doomed to be
Lost in this pit, scared and alone
I cry out “Someone please help me!”
My screams are to no avail though
With every turn I loose myself
I know not where to go

Copyright Â© sandeye75 ... [ 2002-08-13 10:04:51]
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Re: What Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Tuesday, 13th August 2002 @ 03:13:37 PM AEST
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I think that everyone comes to this point in their life....soon enough the answers will come to you and your path will be well lit for you to follow...Great write

Lasca

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