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Array ( [sid] => 22173 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Makes Me Dazed [time] => 2003-08-21 10:05:00 [hometext] => this is one of my few poems that rhymes...thought I would give rhyming another try.
basically this is about how love hasn't worked and will not work....all love has done is made my heart bleed, my soul hurt, and me as a person, just dazed from the pain... [bodytext] => What went wrong here?
It seems my best chance for love has dissappeared
Like the sun when it fades from the sky at night,
there is no more light shining on my life
And I'm feeling a little sad,
kind of funny how one person, can make you hurt so bad

Why do I feel love?
All it's done is make my heart spill blood
I just wish that all of love's doors,
would just go away and be no more
I know the feeling of being loved back can't be replaced,
but it never will, all love will do is make me dazed
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Love Makes Me Dazed

Contributed by Stalkee on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

What went wrong here?
It seems my best chance for love has dissappeared
Like the sun when it fades from the sky at night,
there is no more light shining on my life
And I'm feeling a little sad,
kind of funny how one person, can make you hurt so bad

Why do I feel love?
All it's done is make my heart spill blood
I just wish that all of love's doors,
would just go away and be no more
I know the feeling of being loved back can't be replaced,
but it never will, all love will do is make me dazed

Copyright © Stalkee ... [ 2003-08-21 10:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love Makes Me Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 03:26:20 PM AEST
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no no no! *sticks her foot in loves door to keep it open* maybe you just havent met the right one yet, please dont wish love to go away, for without it what would be the point of living, in a world with no love there would be no joy nor smiles in your heart, love is the greatest gift of life, your day will come, you'll see:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Love Makes Me Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 11:06:44 PM AEST
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that just was not the one for you...they are out there to live without love is just too empty...it will come

Shari

Re: Love Makes Me Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:39:11 PM AEST
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Your poem was beautifully written, but don't give up yet!
Katie

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