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Array ( [sid] => 22141 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why mom? [time] => 2003-08-20 15:25:00 [hometext] => happened to me just a week before i left for UK.... strange.. [bodytext] => Smoked too much
and I wished I were drunk
I wish I did not feel
the pain inside of me
it is burning my inner paradise
the fire is too hot and i am too dry
need some water
need your help
need you, my friend
alone fighting with that
and I am scared
and afraid my world
will be destroyed.
Always when I think I am fine
has to come someone
who throws me on my knees
and makes me think
I am worse than the worst
it hurts...
am I really?
Who helps me?
Who can heal
My hurt bleeding heart
my burnt inside?
How can I find out
if i am good or that bad one?
Mom, why did you tell this to me
I did not mean to leave my family
I wanted to go for holidays
does it really mean I am a whore but nothing else?
Sitting in the light of candle
I can not bear, I can not handle
not sure how I survive this night
I can not wash my brain out.
It just hurts, that is all........
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 21 [informant] => aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Why mom?

Contributed by aika on Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Smoked too much
and I wished I were drunk
I wish I did not feel
the pain inside of me
it is burning my inner paradise
the fire is too hot and i am too dry
need some water
need your help
need you, my friend
alone fighting with that
and I am scared
and afraid my world
will be destroyed.
Always when I think I am fine
has to come someone
who throws me on my knees
and makes me think
I am worse than the worst
it hurts...
am I really?
Who helps me?
Who can heal
My hurt bleeding heart
my burnt inside?
How can I find out
if i am good or that bad one?
Mom, why did you tell this to me
I did not mean to leave my family
I wanted to go for holidays
does it really mean I am a whore but nothing else?
Sitting in the light of candle
I can not bear, I can not handle
not sure how I survive this night
I can not wash my brain out.
It just hurts, that is all........




Copyright © aika ... [ 2003-08-20 15:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Why mom? (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 10:27:39 PM AEST
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Well written piece of questioning
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The answer is in the sun
or possibly the moon,
or as you did in candle light
Find it and real soon




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