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Array ( [sid] => 22100 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I never knew someone could be so shallow [time] => 2003-08-19 12:05:00 [hometext] => ''Do you ever feel that the people who degrade you the most are the ones closest to you?'' [bodytext] => Here I am again.
Angry with the world.
All I do is analyse my life and of course, myself.
I notice the things I do during the day,
wait for my house to be empty then consume a giant cake.
I never knew someone could be so greedy.
Then I feel the frustration as others win and I lose.
I never knew someone could be so envious.
It hurts to know how selfish I am,
it hurts to know how ungrateful I am.
It's ME, ME, ME, self absorbed little worm,
why don't I be quiet, will I ever learn??
Greedy, and selfish, envious and fake,
these words I am writing, are not mine for goodness sake!
Pumped into my brain from an evil person,
I never knew someone could be so shallow.

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I never knew someone could be so shallow

Contributed by broken-glass on Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Here I am again.
Angry with the world.
All I do is analyse my life and of course, myself.
I notice the things I do during the day,
wait for my house to be empty then consume a giant cake.
I never knew someone could be so greedy.
Then I feel the frustration as others win and I lose.
I never knew someone could be so envious.
It hurts to know how selfish I am,
it hurts to know how ungrateful I am.
It's ME, ME, ME, self absorbed little worm,
why don't I be quiet, will I ever learn??
Greedy, and selfish, envious and fake,
these words I am writing, are not mine for goodness sake!
Pumped into my brain from an evil person,
I never knew someone could be so shallow.

Copyright © broken-glass ... [ 2003-08-19 12:05:00]
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Re: I never knew someone could be so shallow (User Rating: 1 )
by smilez_n_frownz on Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 12:54:40 PM AEST
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Hey,I even find my self cot up in all of what I want,Everyone can get greedy once ina while,jut have to remember the value of life,nothing can buy that.
very nice poem
Keep it up!
~sam

Re: I never knew someone could be so shallow (User Rating: 1 )
by knowWhat_kind on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 10:22:35 PM AEST
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That was really good. I feel the same way sometimes, if that is what i think it is about some people i know tell me the same things and it makes me feel horrible. great write if i am wrong on this tell me what it is about

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