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the crackle of wood
the warmth I feel.

I wonder how you are
where you might wander.

an old torn shirt
you used to wear, hangs on a nail
behind the door.

A tear is shed
as I tear my life apart,
searching for reasons
you could not stay.

O`heart be tender
I have cried enough.

Fire to embers
the warmth still inside.. Crow

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Embers

Contributed by crow on Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Tonight by the fire
the crackle of wood
the warmth I feel.

I wonder how you are
where you might wander.

an old torn shirt
you used to wear, hangs on a nail
behind the door.

A tear is shed
as I tear my life apart,
searching for reasons
you could not stay.

O`heart be tender
I have cried enough.

Fire to embers
the warmth still inside.. Crow

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-08-18 20:35:00]
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Re: Embers (User Rating: 1 )
by sideshowrunaway on Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 09:18:10 PM AEST
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I like the simplicity =)

Re: Embers (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 09:21:52 PM AEST
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your words although few are strong and tear at the heartstrings, now you gone made me cry

Shari

Re: Embers (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 10:07:01 PM AEST
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This is really a very heartfelt write Crow. I loved it!

Re: Embers (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 01:21:43 AM AEST
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I can feel the comfort of that fire and the sadness of the pain.Beautiful poem.
michelle

Re: Embers (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 01:57:59 AM AEST
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the warmth....the energy of the flame....it can be so comforting....as are your words.....so simplistic yet profound..... i have cried enough....yes!!

Re: Embers (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 01:33:29 PM AEST
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this is the most beautiful lost love poem i have ever read, so pure and complete within itself and all the feelings are softly held inside, hugs n' love nessa

Re: Embers (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 05:30:57 AM AEST
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beautiful and heartfelt. I loved it.

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