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[aid] => Mick
[title] => THE THINGS I COULD OF SIAD
[time] => 2003-08-18 16:05:00
[hometext] => I wrote this because a gurl killed her self at my school and I never talked to her
[bodytext] => I walked along to day with the wind shoulder thinking of the things I should of told her maybe she would of stayed or maybe it was just wasnt ment to be. I think why did she do it life is not that hard she could of made it. i could of talked to her told her I cared told her that some one loves her and she should not be scared. But life is not for ever some people go sooner I wish they didnt they could of stayed but some people dont be that brave. so today sadly I looking down on her grave wishing I have talked to her maybe she would of stayed.
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[informant] => justen
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THE THINGS I COULD OF SIAD
Contributed by
justen
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Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I walked along to day with the wind shoulder thinking of the things I should of told her maybe she would of stayed or maybe it was just wasnt ment to be. I think why did she do it life is not that hard she could of made it. i could of talked to her told her I cared told her that some one loves her and she should not be scared. But life is not for ever some people go sooner I wish they didnt they could of stayed but some people dont be that brave. so today sadly I looking down on her grave wishing I have talked to her maybe she would of stayed.
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Re: THE THINGS I COULD OF SIAD
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by gogrl on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 04:20:58 PM AEST
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| Wow, it is amazing that the death of this girl you did not know impacted you this way. I really like your message... Keep up the good work. |
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Re: THE THINGS I COULD OF SIAD
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 01:37:31 AM AEST
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| beautiful tribute.....i like that you wrote about something so remote yet so intense to you....the way some things impact our lives....you've captured that "hands tied" feeling....good job!!! |
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Re: THE THINGS I COULD OF SIAD
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 01:42:18 AM AEST
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| I COULD SAY IT WASN'T YOUR FELT. YOU HAD NOTHING TO DO WITH IT. MAYBE SOMEONE BEAT HER BUT MAYBE LIFE WAS TO HARD FOR HER. I KNOW KILLING YOURSELF ISN'T THE ANSWER AND FACING THE PROBLEM IS THE ANSWER |
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Re: THE THINGS I COULD OF SIAD
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by Jacquelynne on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 12:28:26 AM AEST
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| I understand exactly what you are saying. I just lost some one who I had met, and we had all the same friends, but even tho I hardly knew him, it hurt. I like the form of the poem, free and not like most poems. keep writing. |
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