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Array ( [sid] => 22033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Private Dancer [time] => 2003-08-18 02:35:00 [hometext] => I dont know why I wrote this really...just felt like it? [bodytext] => I am a mystery girl
Dancing in the crowd
I make eye contact with you
And draw you to my world
I love how you watch me
As the rest turns to a blur
My body wriths and moves
And you begin to stir
I trail my finger down my body
Then motion you to come to me
You walk over obediantly
So willing to obey
I'll pull you closer
And press our bodies together
As we begin to sway
To the music playing in the background
You'll lean down to my ear
And ask me for my name
And I'll whisper back to you
That I am your mystery girl
Tonight it is just us together
No one else around
I am your private dancer
And I'm glad it's you I've found
The thrill of being yours tonight
Gets me going and things feel so right
This is one night you will never forget
For I am yours and you are mine
And we dance together forgetting time
My body against yours
And your hands on me
As the night draws to and end
I give you one last dance
And smile sweetly as I disappear into the crowd
Leaving you to remember
Your mystery girl dancer

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Private Dancer

Contributed by lostforgood on Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical



I am a mystery girl
Dancing in the crowd
I make eye contact with you
And draw you to my world
I love how you watch me
As the rest turns to a blur
My body wriths and moves
And you begin to stir
I trail my finger down my body
Then motion you to come to me
You walk over obediantly
So willing to obey
I'll pull you closer
And press our bodies together
As we begin to sway
To the music playing in the background
You'll lean down to my ear
And ask me for my name
And I'll whisper back to you
That I am your mystery girl
Tonight it is just us together
No one else around
I am your private dancer
And I'm glad it's you I've found
The thrill of being yours tonight
Gets me going and things feel so right
This is one night you will never forget
For I am yours and you are mine
And we dance together forgetting time
My body against yours
And your hands on me
As the night draws to and end
I give you one last dance
And smile sweetly as I disappear into the crowd
Leaving you to remember
Your mystery girl dancer





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Re: Private Dancer (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 03:25:59 AM AEST
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this is good.......i like the thought behind it!!!!!!!!!!!


Re: Private Dancer (User Rating: 1 )
by fattyt on Tuesday, 26th August 2003 @ 06:00:42 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a really amazing poem, really seductive...nicely done Jaime


Re: Private Dancer (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 03:15:04 AM AEST
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Well written..as jaeann said the thought behind the poem is really beautiful. venkat




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