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Array ( [sid] => 22018 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => your body [time] => 2003-08-17 19:05:00 [hometext] => how your body is in pain [bodytext] => Sometimes you just feel so empty that it confuses you.
Like you don’t know exactly what you are feeling.
It just consumes everything you think to do,
You start to wonder if you’re really healing.

Your head screams with so much pain,
You sit and bawl in your endless shame.
You wonder why you feel so bad,
No more do you feel glad.

Screaming for a way to get out,
Your mind is about to shout,
What do I do?
What do I do?

Its get so hard to breath,
Your blood begins to seethe ,
You’re so confused,
Your eyes feel used.

Nothing is right anymore,
Nothing feels the same anymore.
Everything is fading away to you,
Everything is no longer familiar to you.
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your body

Contributed by frozensuicide on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Sometimes you just feel so empty that it confuses you.
Like you don’t know exactly what you are feeling.
It just consumes everything you think to do,
You start to wonder if you’re really healing.

Your head screams with so much pain,
You sit and bawl in your endless shame.
You wonder why you feel so bad,
No more do you feel glad.

Screaming for a way to get out,
Your mind is about to shout,
What do I do?
What do I do?

Its get so hard to breath,
Your blood begins to seethe ,
You’re so confused,
Your eyes feel used.

Nothing is right anymore,
Nothing feels the same anymore.
Everything is fading away to you,
Everything is no longer familiar to you.

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Re: your body (User Rating: 1 )
by smilez_n_frownz on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 07:12:08 PM AEST
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Hey,your poem was great,i acutally have done kinda the same try to cry away the pain and guilt but it always comes back you stop the hurting your self but you still have all the thoughts in your head,they never go.But life gets hard.....seems to always be......but things will get better.slowly but surely.
great write!
-sam

Re: your body (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 10:33:31 PM AEST
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your eyes feel used.....
so true.....this is good.....you descibed the literal pain..........really really great write!!!!

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