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Array ( [sid] => 22004 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Thoughts Of Twlight [time] => 2003-08-17 11:45:00 [hometext] => Fore she is the one I love, the only one I can trust, come my love, share in my blood.

Kane [bodytext] => The black clouds and rain, a soul filled with pain,
Mad at the world, saying goodbye to my girl,
A final kiss from twlights lips,
Goodbye my love, she's gone at the crack of dawn,

Burned into the window the memory of you, the sky peaceful and blue,
This can't be right, have I accepted the light,
I must turn away, turn my back on today,
Emotions are lies, they are only a fasle guide,

Anger and pain, the acceptance of shame,
This is my life, drawing tattoos on myself with a knife,
Drink from my blood and you shall be saved,
That's the most retarded thing I ever head someone say,

Close my eyes, cover my ears, sunlight get the hell outta of here,
Peace I will not take, your God is a fake,
Give me salvation, I rather cause complete devastation,
Come again my twlight mistress, release me from my self made prison,

Waiting for Satan, or his manifestion,
Bring on death, fore my love has already left,
I miss her cold touch, she's the only one I trust,
For her I would die, hold me close, let my sprit fly.

Heart & Soul
Kane
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 284 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Kane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Thoughts Of Twlight

Contributed by Kane on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 11:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The black clouds and rain, a soul filled with pain,
Mad at the world, saying goodbye to my girl,
A final kiss from twlights lips,
Goodbye my love, she's gone at the crack of dawn,

Burned into the window the memory of you, the sky peaceful and blue,
This can't be right, have I accepted the light,
I must turn away, turn my back on today,
Emotions are lies, they are only a fasle guide,

Anger and pain, the acceptance of shame,
This is my life, drawing tattoos on myself with a knife,
Drink from my blood and you shall be saved,
That's the most retarded thing I ever head someone say,

Close my eyes, cover my ears, sunlight get the hell outta of here,
Peace I will not take, your God is a fake,
Give me salvation, I rather cause complete devastation,
Come again my twlight mistress, release me from my self made prison,

Waiting for Satan, or his manifestion,
Bring on death, fore my love has already left,
I miss her cold touch, she's the only one I trust,
For her I would die, hold me close, let my sprit fly.

Heart & Soul
Kane




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Re: Thoughts Of Twlight (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 06:06:11 PM AEST
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this rocks!!!
drink from my blood and you shall be saved....
it is the most retarded thing to push down anyone's throat....all because you're truly afraid of them...their voice....their reasoning....
you have written a very good piece here.....


Re: Thoughts Of Twlight (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 08:32:58 PM AEST
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a lot of things going on here in this poem, its a dark love poem, has a hint of spiritualism, death, and love again... excellent write:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: Thoughts Of Twlight (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 09:23:59 PM AEST
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Oooh I love it! Exquisite!

~ Moonlit




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