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Array ( [sid] => 21979 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Stuart [time] => 2003-08-16 19:05:00 [hometext] => I know it's pretty tacky to write about someone you can never have, but I did [bodytext] => If I was to tell you how i feel
What would you say
Would you listen to my words?
Or would you turn away?

I know that it's bad timing
And that we could never be
But I can't help the way I feel
Why can't you see?

You probably think I'm insane
And maybe not all there
But I'm telling you now
That judgement is not fair.

Would you listen if I told you
That I can't concentrate in school?
I keep worrying that you'll leave
Thinking I'm just a fool.

Did i ever tell you
That you occupy my sleep.
You appear in all my dreams at night,
And in my tears when i weep.

It's like a dagger in my heart
To think that you don't care
And that very same dagger rips me apart
In the moment you're not there.

It's very hard to find
A person tht I relate to
But I've found all I need in someone
When i look at you.

You understand my emotions
I can trust you with my heart
But I know we'll never work
This realisation tears me apart. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Katie-Kate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Stuart

Contributed by Katie-Kate on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If I was to tell you how i feel
What would you say
Would you listen to my words?
Or would you turn away?

I know that it's bad timing
And that we could never be
But I can't help the way I feel
Why can't you see?

You probably think I'm insane
And maybe not all there
But I'm telling you now
That judgement is not fair.

Would you listen if I told you
That I can't concentrate in school?
I keep worrying that you'll leave
Thinking I'm just a fool.

Did i ever tell you
That you occupy my sleep.
You appear in all my dreams at night,
And in my tears when i weep.

It's like a dagger in my heart
To think that you don't care
And that very same dagger rips me apart
In the moment you're not there.

It's very hard to find
A person tht I relate to
But I've found all I need in someone
When i look at you.

You understand my emotions
I can trust you with my heart
But I know we'll never work
This realisation tears me apart.

Copyright © Katie-Kate ... [ 2003-08-16 19:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stuart (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweetie on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 02:19:13 AM AEST
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I know exactly how it feels to want someone you can't have. I feel that way everyday I have this longing 4 a married man with a son my age now how bout that! Ridiculus huh? But we can't help it so what do we do???
hang in there
Sweetie

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