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Can i hope him give me one kiss

I sit and think of all the times we were together
Our memories stretching tight as leather

I went fourteen years without your love, without one kiss
All my life coming apart, going amiss

Should I hope for your love once more
Should I show you how much of you i adore

Or should i wait for you to show your love to me
While i let the clouds hear my sorrowful plea?

Maybe one day i can bear to hope him to change
Or shall i give our love up for something in exchange?

My heart pounds when i see his eyes
Does that mean i should believe his lies?

Should i give you something your heart is unworthy of
Something as beautiful as real love?

Can my heart finally realize your bad
Or has my heart been had?

I hope you soon realize what you gave away
Someone you can no longer betray

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Love Broken

Contributed by NikkiMNelson on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 07:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My soul is heavy with bliss
Can i hope him give me one kiss

I sit and think of all the times we were together
Our memories stretching tight as leather

I went fourteen years without your love, without one kiss
All my life coming apart, going amiss

Should I hope for your love once more
Should I show you how much of you i adore

Or should i wait for you to show your love to me
While i let the clouds hear my sorrowful plea?

Maybe one day i can bear to hope him to change
Or shall i give our love up for something in exchange?

My heart pounds when i see his eyes
Does that mean i should believe his lies?

Should i give you something your heart is unworthy of
Something as beautiful as real love?

Can my heart finally realize your bad
Or has my heart been had?

I hope you soon realize what you gave away
Someone you can no longer betray

Copyright © NikkiMNelson ... [ 2003-08-14 07:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 04:44:35 AM AEST
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the epitome of frustration.....when they don't realize what they're throwing away...right before there very eyes.....you wrote something really powerful here......i hope he no longer betrays......

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