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Array ( [sid] => 21876 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Cheap Ornaments [time] => 2003-08-13 23:35:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Beyond the vivacious veneer of the
quaint authentic circus tent
antiquity like tinsel coated toys chiselled but
decorative facades peeling pecariously
glinting under the stunted sunbeams
drenched in a molten drapery of August candy aromas
Mere whiffs not enough
There lies the waning exhilaration
unlatching the hinges of the doddery rollercoaster
They creak grunt bolt
and startle
but do not invoke adrenaline
but rather a nauseating
wave of dread.
Guffaws amiss
And the wenches garish under the midday sun with gel sodden hair
slackened against the wind and throbbing rollercoaster
scream
Coin me a smile because nothing is real anymore
Yes scream banefully
Gory is your puckered lipstick
Of same shade as the pinstripes on the flapping circus tent
Dont whisper jaded
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 43 [informant] => CARAAAAA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Cheap Ornaments

Contributed by CARAAAAA on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Beyond the vivacious veneer of the
quaint authentic circus tent
antiquity like tinsel coated toys chiselled but
decorative facades peeling pecariously
glinting under the stunted sunbeams
drenched in a molten drapery of August candy aromas
Mere whiffs not enough
There lies the waning exhilaration
unlatching the hinges of the doddery rollercoaster
They creak grunt bolt
and startle
but do not invoke adrenaline
but rather a nauseating
wave of dread.
Guffaws amiss
And the wenches garish under the midday sun with gel sodden hair
slackened against the wind and throbbing rollercoaster
scream
Coin me a smile because nothing is real anymore
Yes scream banefully
Gory is your puckered lipstick
Of same shade as the pinstripes on the flapping circus tent
Dont whisper jaded




Copyright © CARAAAAA ... [ 2003-08-13 23:35:00]
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Re: Cheap Ornaments (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 08:08:50 AM AEST
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I love this... let me know when you get a book published..... ;) Awesome write!




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