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[aid] => Mick
[title] => You Can't Take It Back
[time] => 2003-08-13 22:05:00
[hometext] => This poem i wrote quite a while back, when a close friend of mine committed suicide. i was mad at the time, but now i'm just sad.
[bodytext] => On the outside you are normal On the outside you fit in On the outside you are happy But the sadness is within You keep your feelings hidden With that mask you paint on bright No one knows the difference No one knows the battles that you fight. Sure they have their issues And their bad days come and go But your bad days are eternal You mustn't let it show. You are scared of your emotions You're scared that they'll find out The hate and the anguish that you hide The pain you cannot shout. But the tormenting in your heart Wont let you live your life They don't know your pain They can't see your strife. There's only one solution There's only one way out To end your hurt and hateful days As life cannot be without. So you think of happy places Think of peaceful days You ponder how it is that you will go There are so many ways. Your family find you still They see your stone cold eyes They know you've done this to yourself You didn't let them say their good byes. You deprived them of a daughter You ignored their loving arms You were a sister to your siblings Did you think how they'd be harmed? You found the ultimate solution You ended life ............ and then You remembered all you left behind You've sent your loved ones round the bend. It's too late to turn back The deed is already done You look at their tears and agony Look what you have done!!! You thought your life was hard Well what about your friends? I don't suppose you thought of that All they once knew is at an end. You now wish you could take it back Reverse the hands of time Go back and sort your feeligns out But guess what......... YOU CAN'T [comments] => 3 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Katie-Kate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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