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Array ( [sid] => 21859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => For You [time] => 2003-08-13 14:35:00 [hometext] => For Dean. [bodytext] => I don't want to sleep yet
And I don't want to face the day
It's never good enough
Perfection is too far away
I can't stand missing you
And I'm doing it all for you

I can hide from the world
Pull the covers over my head
Somehow you understand
That's why you're sending me to bed
So just for you I'll sleep
But somehow I just want to weep

You fell in love with me
Because of who I was that day
But you keep changing me
I'll get better somehow, someway
If it makes you happy
I'll give back what you've given me

I'll never let you go
I can't go on without you now
And you're just what I need
I can live 'cause you show me how
I'm so far from perfect
But from the very start we clicked

I'm sorry I screw up
That everything I touch turns black
That you have to teach me
That all my life I've been off-track
But I really love you
And there's nothing I wouldn't do

So I promise to try
And prove I will not be outdone
Put a smile on your face
Till what we have to do is done
But if I can't take it
Please let me break a little bit

'Cause I don't want to be
Any part of any reason
For your unhappiness
Or the one on trial for treason
I'll make it up to you
I'll fix it all and be brand new [comments] => 3 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
For You

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I don't want to sleep yet
And I don't want to face the day
It's never good enough
Perfection is too far away
I can't stand missing you
And I'm doing it all for you

I can hide from the world
Pull the covers over my head
Somehow you understand
That's why you're sending me to bed
So just for you I'll sleep
But somehow I just want to weep

You fell in love with me
Because of who I was that day
But you keep changing me
I'll get better somehow, someway
If it makes you happy
I'll give back what you've given me

I'll never let you go
I can't go on without you now
And you're just what I need
I can live 'cause you show me how
I'm so far from perfect
But from the very start we clicked

I'm sorry I screw up
That everything I touch turns black
That you have to teach me
That all my life I've been off-track
But I really love you
And there's nothing I wouldn't do

So I promise to try
And prove I will not be outdone
Put a smile on your face
Till what we have to do is done
But if I can't take it
Please let me break a little bit

'Cause I don't want to be
Any part of any reason
For your unhappiness
Or the one on trial for treason
I'll make it up to you
I'll fix it all and be brand new




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-08-13 14:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: For You (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 05:43:54 AM AEST
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heart felt feelings..expressed well..
venkat


Re: For You (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 04:31:19 PM AEST
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Great write Moonlit - you express your frustration and confusion well ... Jan


Re: For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 09:57:54 PM AEST
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You expressed your emotions quite beautifully here. It's a very good and touchy write friend!
Saira




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