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Are feelings I can’t explain,
Sometimes they make me feel good
Sometimes they give me pain

I think about you non-stop
And hope that you care
But I’m not quite sure
If you even know that I’m there

I wonder sometimes, as I lie in bed,
If all those bad things were really said

I’m so confused, what should I do?
I can’t think of anything, except for you.

I’m curious to know,
If you can really look inside of me.
If that could happen,
Would you understand what you see?

If only you could open your eyes,
To see, then you would know
You matter a great deal to me.

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Wrapped Up Inside

Contributed by zee on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Wrapped up inside
Are feelings I can’t explain,
Sometimes they make me feel good
Sometimes they give me pain

I think about you non-stop
And hope that you care
But I’m not quite sure
If you even know that I’m there

I wonder sometimes, as I lie in bed,
If all those bad things were really said

I’m so confused, what should I do?
I can’t think of anything, except for you.

I’m curious to know,
If you can really look inside of me.
If that could happen,
Would you understand what you see?

If only you could open your eyes,
To see, then you would know
You matter a great deal to me.

Copyright Â© zee ... [ 2003-08-13 14:05:00]
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Re: Wrapped Up Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 08:23:41 AM AEST
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This is a good write. I liked the second last stanza. It's nice. Keep up the good work!
Saira

Re: Wrapped Up Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by gogrl on Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 06:09:53 PM AEST
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Very emotional and I am sorry you have to go through that. I agree with Saira on the second to last stanza, bravo... Very well said.

Keep up the good work!

Re: Wrapped Up Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 07:20:53 PM AEST
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Thank U Very much For U r Appreciation!!

Re: Wrapped Up Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Zee on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 07:24:07 PM AEST
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Thank You!!

Re: Wrapped Up Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by krystal on Friday, 22nd August 2003 @ 01:46:11 PM AEST
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Zee this is lovely, it is so difficult to feel for someone who does not return the same. Take comfort in knowing that one day the pain will end and you will find that someone who will return those feelings, who will look inside of you and understand what you have hidden in there, someone who will fill that empty place in your heart making you whole once again...Good job Zee...Krystal:)

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