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Array ( [sid] => 21829 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Black Heart [time] => 2003-08-13 01:05:00 [hometext] => At a very young age this person learns how cruel people can be. he was always taking, never giving. he drags himself to manhood.
not one other person in his life, he finds the light. [bodytext] => Black Heart I can see years back,
the woman that left you on a darkening
corner, a child of eight.

You smile after thousands of years it seems,
not wanting to blame or heal inside.

How tortured you are, the lies, the revenge,
the people you hurt.

Sooth yourself Black Heart don`t care,
you have done that for years.

Death awaits, and you will follow,
no second chance for the darkened souls.

Silence my answer again...... Crow [comments] => 9 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Black Heart

Contributed by crow on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Black Heart I can see years back,
the woman that left you on a darkening
corner, a child of eight.

You smile after thousands of years it seems,
not wanting to blame or heal inside.

How tortured you are, the lies, the revenge,
the people you hurt.

Sooth yourself Black Heart don`t care,
you have done that for years.

Death awaits, and you will follow,
no second chance for the darkened souls.

Silence my answer again...... Crow

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-08-13 01:05:00]
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Re: Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 03:44:13 AM AEST
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great story

Re: Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by krystal on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 05:14:52 AM AEST
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crow I don't think you have written a poem I have not enjoyed. Once again this is absolutely wonderful. You have great talent crow please keep them coming. A great write and thoroughly enjoyed again !

Krystal:)

Re: Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 05:55:20 AM AEST
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well written as always
Shari

Re: Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 01:22:38 PM AEST
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you take me to places very few can....no second chance for the darkened souls.....amazing story....thank you for sharing......

Re: Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 03:06:28 PM AEST
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Tragically that is the way of things but you have captured it so well

I'd very much value your opinion on the last one I have written ".......given up on Gods"

Re: Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:45:27 PM AEST
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thank you so much, Crow

Re: Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:51:39 PM AEST
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thank you for the comment, Crow

Re: Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:55:20 PM AEST
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thank you jaeann, i look foward to your comments, Crow

Re: Black Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:59:10 PM AEST
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yes it does, sometimes good comes from it. Crow "on my way"

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