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Array ( [sid] => 21819 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Solemn Journey [time] => 2003-08-12 20:05:00 [hometext] => and it does not pass.......... [bodytext] => Time has not passed tasting any less bitter
than from the moments of yesterday......
If in fact peace is destined to be here by now
than someone lied in painful shades of gray....
Playing the wish game ..... a sweet inhalation of relief.....elusive now today.....
Cruelly,
all that's left is the pain.....
To walk in a haze of uncaring ..... unaware of
passing time on some forgotten timeline..
a passenger with no train....
A time once when all help was there....
Talking to just fill the air....
A shoulder of solace..... but now.....
no one remembers but me..........
I sit alone head full of memories of
unfathomable losses with no one close by
to hear....
and not one person sees..... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Solemn Journey

Contributed by jaeann on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Time has not passed tasting any less bitter
than from the moments of yesterday......
If in fact peace is destined to be here by now
than someone lied in painful shades of gray....
Playing the wish game ..... a sweet inhalation of relief.....elusive now today.....
Cruelly,
all that's left is the pain.....
To walk in a haze of uncaring ..... unaware of
passing time on some forgotten timeline..
a passenger with no train....
A time once when all help was there....
Talking to just fill the air....
A shoulder of solace..... but now.....
no one remembers but me..........
I sit alone head full of memories of
unfathomable losses with no one close by
to hear....
and not one person sees.....




Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-08-12 20:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Solemn Journey (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 08:47:18 PM AEST
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Wow, what a sad write, this pulled at my heart, beautifully written, i know how ya feel. Great write.
Lisa


Re: Solemn Journey (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 06:37:42 AM AEST
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self expressive...and it is very sad... venkat.


Re: Solemn Journey (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 05:25:50 PM AEST
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another very good write, sensitive. i look foward to your work. Crow


Re: Solemn Journey (User Rating: 1 )
by POOBEAR on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 08:37:01 PM AEST
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This really hit home for me. Such a lonely
place to be. It has brought tears to my
eyes because I could truly feel the pain.
Thank you for sharing these beautifully
descriptive words and making me feel
that I am not alone.
Very Sincerely,
POOBEAR


Re: Solemn Journey (User Rating: 1 )
by ravenfire on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 12:28:27 PM AEST
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"talking just to fill the air"
beautiful.




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