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Array ( [sid] => 21807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Will You Be Strong [time] => 2003-08-12 14:35:00 [hometext] => A real life experience where I did prove to be strong in the end (just so you know). [bodytext] => It is one of those days, indeed one of those things
you know, when the situation is beyond your control
And despite you desire, despite your effort
the moment does not move, where you'd hoped it would go

She is so close to you now, and you barely know how
because her approach was so subtle, and so slow
Arousal is her objective; she is damn sure going get it
as she reaches to touch you, and it grows

You cannot avoid her; no, you cannot ignore her
Since, your situation puts you around her everyday
You realize you have a woman; overall, she's a good one
So you have done your best resist and maintain

But, daily her lips tease, hinting they want to please
as she casually speaks of games she likes to play
Because the flesh is weak, every word that she speaks
has lead you to this moment, of this day.

Now you're together alone; you are away from your home,
ready to experience what you've envisioned in your mind
Softly, her lips kiss you and she's ready to give you
the pleasures and delights you hoped you'd find.

And as a man you're prone, despite your lady at home
to be caught-up with her intricate design.
Now,the question:
Will you be strong, or will do your woman wrong
just as the average man is inclined.?
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 267 [topic] => 33 [informant] => arthur1210 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Will You Be Strong

Contributed by arthur1210 on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

It is one of those days, indeed one of those things
you know, when the situation is beyond your control
And despite you desire, despite your effort
the moment does not move, where you'd hoped it would go

She is so close to you now, and you barely know how
because her approach was so subtle, and so slow
Arousal is her objective; she is damn sure going get it
as she reaches to touch you, and it grows

You cannot avoid her; no, you cannot ignore her
Since, your situation puts you around her everyday
You realize you have a woman; overall, she's a good one
So you have done your best resist and maintain

But, daily her lips tease, hinting they want to please
as she casually speaks of games she likes to play
Because the flesh is weak, every word that she speaks
has lead you to this moment, of this day.

Now you're together alone; you are away from your home,
ready to experience what you've envisioned in your mind
Softly, her lips kiss you and she's ready to give you
the pleasures and delights you hoped you'd find.

And as a man you're prone, despite your lady at home
to be caught-up with her intricate design.
Now,the question:
Will you be strong, or will do your woman wrong
just as the average man is inclined.?

Copyright © arthur1210 ... [ 2003-08-12 14:35:00]
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Re: Will You Be Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:38:29 PM AEST
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nice story... just so you know long lines make for a weird rhythm.... not always a good thing... where you have commas or appostrophe's you might try making them a new line instead of just 1 line... might help out a little and make it easier to read.

Re: Will You Be Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by arthur1210 on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 09:10:39 PM AEST
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I understand what you mean, i guess i just posted it as I wrote it.

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