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Array ( [sid] => 21806 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Walk [time] => 2003-08-12 14:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am haunted by the memories
of one or two good times,
I persevered while being chastised
for imaginary crimes.
Now the sun has set,
its light no more,
and the tide has washed away the shore.
I revel in the imagery,
your self appointed sanctity,
and wonder how it is I chose
this darkened path where the shadows close.
Take a walk with me
down this darkened path,
love has no place in eternal wrath.
I no longer fear this empty home,
So I am coming home alone. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 446 [topic] => 48 [informant] => gogrl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

A Walk

Contributed by gogrl on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I am haunted by the memories
of one or two good times,
I persevered while being chastised
for imaginary crimes.
Now the sun has set,
its light no more,
and the tide has washed away the shore.
I revel in the imagery,
your self appointed sanctity,
and wonder how it is I chose
this darkened path where the shadows close.
Take a walk with me
down this darkened path,
love has no place in eternal wrath.
I no longer fear this empty home,
So I am coming home alone.

Copyright © gogrl ... [ 2003-08-12 14:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Walk (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 02:18:44 PM AEST
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Wow, inner turmoil. Tough stuff. Keep up the good work!

Re: A Walk (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 03:03:01 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a wonderful write, i can feel the sadness in your words, i look forward to seeing more from you.
Lisa

Re: A Walk (User Rating: 1 )
by arthur1210 on Wednesday, 13th August 2003 @ 09:16:28 PM AEST
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Your opening caught me instantly, very nice. the emotion is great (in a sad way) well written... thanks for sharing

Re: A Walk (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 09:17:25 PM AEST
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Oh this is so beautiful...sad though...I loved it! Thanks!
Saira

Re: A Walk (User Rating: 1 )
by gogrl on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:10:11 PM AEST
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Thank you very much! It was a tough moment for sure but life would be boring without those tough moments and I wouldn't be inspired to write if I didn't have them.

Have a beautiful day!

Re: A Walk (User Rating: 1 )
by gogrl on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:11:43 PM AEST
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Thank you Lisa. When I have more time I will be sure to read your posts as well.

Thank you for taking the time to read it.
Shannon

Re: A Walk (User Rating: 1 )
by gogrl on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:13:29 PM AEST
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Thank you very much for takin the time to read my piece. Believe it or not I wasn't as sad as it sounds. It was more acceptance than sadness.

Thank you again and have a beautiful day.

Re: A Walk (User Rating: 1 )
by gogrl on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 08:16:03 PM AEST
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Thank you so much! I am glad that you enjoyed it. It was probably one of the most meaningful pieces I have ever wrote. It came from the heart of acceptance not anger or misery ar anything else.

I am proud of that one and I am very glad that you enjoyed it.

Thank you again girl, have a great weekend!
Shannon

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