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Array ( [sid] => 21799 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Split Soul [time] => 2003-08-12 10:35:00 [hometext] => I thought I'd try something different. I don't think I'll be doing this again. [bodytext] => Split soul - Fixed remembrance
The shadow of forgotten beauty
Loving - Kills reaction
The passion of knowing truly
Lay down and lie for me
Calm down, just one more please
She's been gone
For so long
She's been gone
For so long
Save me - Whole has sifted
The knowledge of the absence heavy
Plainly, I'm infected
The anger is no longer ready
Standing and waiting unknown
Breathing and living alone
She's been gone
For so long
She's been gone
For so long
I can remember the presence well - and
I remember it heaven - now just sand
(stay with me)
The memories
(please stay with me)
I was happy
(stay with me)
Now left from me
(please stay with me)
Embrace misery
She's been gone
For so long
She's been gone
For so long [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 34 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Split Soul

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Split soul - Fixed remembrance
The shadow of forgotten beauty
Loving - Kills reaction
The passion of knowing truly
Lay down and lie for me
Calm down, just one more please
She's been gone
For so long
She's been gone
For so long
Save me - Whole has sifted
The knowledge of the absence heavy
Plainly, I'm infected
The anger is no longer ready
Standing and waiting unknown
Breathing and living alone
She's been gone
For so long
She's been gone
For so long
I can remember the presence well - and
I remember it heaven - now just sand
(stay with me)
The memories
(please stay with me)
I was happy
(stay with me)
Now left from me
(please stay with me)
Embrace misery
She's been gone
For so long
She's been gone
For so long

Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2003-08-12 10:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Split Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 02:26:56 PM AEST
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this so pleading.....so heartbreaking.......i remember it heaven........from that line on down........reminds me i've my daughter..........she's been gone.........for so long........
i hope you DO do it again.......this was real...honest....and heart felt.......really really good!!!

Re: Split Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 11:05:35 PM AEST
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hey baby, this was good, I want you to write this kind of stuff, it is sweet, and from ur heart. I love you and miss you so much right now, Squee. I want you to hold me again.

love
hugs
and tons of kisses

ur gurl forever
or as long as you'll have me,
jenni kitti

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