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Array ( [sid] => 21786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => blades of skin [time] => 2003-08-12 05:05:00 [hometext] => this is about a guy that i fear [bodytext] => when the blades cut the skin the thoughts of sin flow out of my soul

its sad u see at what kind of hand life has given me

its not fair what happen to me when i was young but i live with it

he came in my dream and told me it was ok but it was all a lie

the carving aside the walls was deadly to my body knowing its over soon

he cut me once then i knew he was real not just a shadow figure outside the light

the laugh he gave was weird and he was burned bad

i guess i figured i had to do what had to do i sent back to hell in a bag [comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 13 [informant] => LIVINGLIFE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

blades of skin

Contributed by LIVINGLIFE on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

when the blades cut the skin the thoughts of sin flow out of my soul

its sad u see at what kind of hand life has given me

its not fair what happen to me when i was young but i live with it

he came in my dream and told me it was ok but it was all a lie

the carving aside the walls was deadly to my body knowing its over soon

he cut me once then i knew he was real not just a shadow figure outside the light

the laugh he gave was weird and he was burned bad

i guess i figured i had to do what had to do i sent back to hell in a bag

Copyright © LIVINGLIFE ... [ 2003-08-12 05:05:00]
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Re: blades of skin (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:31:16 AM AEST
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you've captured your fear.....i've been there.....these words are profound..........he came in my dream.........scary.....
good write....

Re: blades of skin (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th October 2003 @ 11:50:40 PM AEST
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Well, Hunnie (I'm his girlfriend) I think this poem is great. I knew about your fear but this is something amazing. You are living with this fear and you wrote about it! Keep up the work my sexy man!

P.S. I wouldn't mind a nice poem!!

Cilla

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