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Array ( [sid] => 21778 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Dead Withing [time] => 2003-08-12 01:05:00 [hometext] => This just may be my final poem....I can't take anymore. [bodytext] => I don't know what to do anymore
I used to be so happy, but no more
I lost everything in a freak accident
I can't love another person, future or present

I lost my heart; it was torn to pieces and left on the ground
I lost my mind; reality broke into it and insanity is sticking around
I lost my hope; I let it go and it drifted away
I lost everything; so why am I still alive today?

I can't even recognize myself in the reflection
My face isn't what it was, my scars have infection
I can't find the old me, it's somewhere in my head
I can never bring back the old it, it's dead

I still live today because of one small belief
That I will find someone who will give me relief
But its all a lie; an illusion made inside
Trying to prove that I have already died

I'm lost, confused, depressed, insane
It's best for me to just end this pain
I grab the pills, and realize this is the end
I swallow the pills, and let them contend

I become dizzy, I smile with delight
This is it, my dying night
I whisper goodbye into the air
And collapse without a care


Goodbye everyone... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ruby_star_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Dead Withing

Contributed by ruby_star_angel on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I don't know what to do anymore
I used to be so happy, but no more
I lost everything in a freak accident
I can't love another person, future or present

I lost my heart; it was torn to pieces and left on the ground
I lost my mind; reality broke into it and insanity is sticking around
I lost my hope; I let it go and it drifted away
I lost everything; so why am I still alive today?

I can't even recognize myself in the reflection
My face isn't what it was, my scars have infection
I can't find the old me, it's somewhere in my head
I can never bring back the old it, it's dead

I still live today because of one small belief
That I will find someone who will give me relief
But its all a lie; an illusion made inside
Trying to prove that I have already died

I'm lost, confused, depressed, insane
It's best for me to just end this pain
I grab the pills, and realize this is the end
I swallow the pills, and let them contend

I become dizzy, I smile with delight
This is it, my dying night
I whisper goodbye into the air
And collapse without a care


Goodbye everyone...




Copyright © ruby_star_angel ... [ 2003-08-12 01:05:00]
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Re: Dead Withing (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:21:58 AM AEST
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this was well written and very emotional. Know what i can't take anymore of? People always saying there gonna kill themselves. I've been there before and it hurts to know that ppl are going through the same thing as me/ Just think of all the ppl that will miss you...

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Dead Withing (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 07:10:06 PM AEST
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oh this is so sad and beautiful...if you ever need to talk, please pm me, i promise i will listen...


Re: Dead Withing (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 06:49:32 AM AEST
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Oh Manda honey, please, please don't give up yet.. you know there are people that care about you, I care about you, and even though i'm not online much at the moment doesn't mean i don't think about you and hope for you and worry about you..
this is a beautiful poem, but let it stay a poem.. i'd miss you so much if you were to go.. give life a chance hun..
x_x_x




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