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Array ( [sid] => 21689 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => 911 [time] => 2003-08-10 03:45:00 [hometext] => along the same lines as mommy please come home [bodytext] => I'm laying here waiting
For that one devestating call
The one that says
You've been in an accident
And are in critical condition
I'm sitting here hoping
These feelings are wrong
And you're just out with friends
Having a good time
Safe as can be
I'm waiting here
Wishing you the best
Dreading the day that these feelings are true
I can't stand the thought of you not being here
It brings tears to my eyes
Just thinking that if it were true
That was the last time i would hear you voice
See your sweet smile
Feel your gentle touch
And to think I didn't even say I love you
I can't just one last time
All these late nights
Trying to fall asleep
Yet waiting to hear the stairs creak
Make it back safely
I need you here
I can't handle that call [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 13 [informant] => squeesh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

911

Contributed by squeesh on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 03:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm laying here waiting
For that one devestating call
The one that says
You've been in an accident
And are in critical condition
I'm sitting here hoping
These feelings are wrong
And you're just out with friends
Having a good time
Safe as can be
I'm waiting here
Wishing you the best
Dreading the day that these feelings are true
I can't stand the thought of you not being here
It brings tears to my eyes
Just thinking that if it were true
That was the last time i would hear you voice
See your sweet smile
Feel your gentle touch
And to think I didn't even say I love you
I can't just one last time
All these late nights
Trying to fall asleep
Yet waiting to hear the stairs creak
Make it back safely
I need you here
I can't handle that call

Copyright © squeesh ... [ 2003-08-10 03:45:00]
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Re: 911 (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 04:15:57 AM AEST
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that call does come ever so swiftly.....i pray the ring does not deafen...........very well put....good read!!!

Re: 911 (User Rating: 1 )
by olasunkanmi on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 04:37:51 AM AEST
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nicely written,

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