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Dream

Contributed by lilsoccerbaby3 on Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 11:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Its like your dreaming, although your wide awake, a feeling you don't want to lose or mistake. Your heart is feeling something indescribable, and yet so much, like it can be lit with someone's warm touch. A feeling that races in your head, one that never stops, the same vision playing again and again as your lying in bed. In your eyes you see perfection, nothing could go wrong, not even when you know the true reflection. Nothing ever felt so right, even when you thought love was out of sight. Its a feeling so scary and yet so good, even if you thought it never would. This feeling grows stronger and stronger, and its like you can wait no longer, its like everything comes true, like you wished upon a star, and this good feeling came, not even having you look far. You go to sleep happy knowing you have everything, Your on top of the world, you feel like a king. Then you wake up and think to yourself did I really find love or was it a dream. Yourhope that this feeling is what it seems, then you realize its so very true you fell in love, its not a dream

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Re: Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 11:57:17 PM AEST
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and that realization can be the start to the rest of your life.......beautiful write.....i'd like to see it in a different format though....let the words hit you more......just a thought.......good job!!!

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