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Shivers running up my spine
A thrill runs through my body
I feel the evil take over my mind.
The darkness awaits me
Calling out to me
I want to raise the demons
I want to set the evil free
Let me roam the world of evil
This world I’m in now is so boring
Let me see what others haven’t
The world of the unknown is calling
I want to burn in the fiery deep
I would very much like to meet satan
I want to be part of the world of the darkness
I want to be taken.
I feel this shadow in the back of my mind
It won’t ever leave me alone
It grows ever darker, becoming more powerful
Growing a mind of it’s own.
So soon the shadow will overtake me
Soon this impulse will own me
And when i disappear from this land
Know, hidden in the darkness is where I’ll be.
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Shadow of my Mind

Contributed by blackfire9786 on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Darkness running through my veins
Shivers running up my spine
A thrill runs through my body
I feel the evil take over my mind.
The darkness awaits me
Calling out to me
I want to raise the demons
I want to set the evil free
Let me roam the world of evil
This world I’m in now is so boring
Let me see what others haven’t
The world of the unknown is calling
I want to burn in the fiery deep
I would very much like to meet satan
I want to be part of the world of the darkness
I want to be taken.
I feel this shadow in the back of my mind
It won’t ever leave me alone
It grows ever darker, becoming more powerful
Growing a mind of it’s own.
So soon the shadow will overtake me
Soon this impulse will own me
And when i disappear from this land
Know, hidden in the darkness is where I’ll be.

Copyright Â© blackfire9786 ... [ 2003-08-08 23:35:00]
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Re: Shadow of my Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 05:32:01 AM AEST
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awesome write.........you've captured the knock at the door of insanity..........

Re: Shadow of my Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Freedom88 on Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 08:08:33 PM AEST
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Your poem is good and deep, like you poured your troubles onto the paper. The poem makes me feel sad deep inside my heart because I know what ur saying. I hope you find hope and happiness and now that God is watching over you and LOVES you no matter what. Keep expressing urself:)

Re: Shadow of my Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 03:18:30 PM AEST
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So expressive and you really know how to capture an audiance...
~stacie~

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