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Forgotten Soul

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Oh forgotten soul that drifts with the wind, how so lonesome you are
For you have been forsaken, left alone with only a sad broken heart
Tears they fall frequently along with all hopes of finding love
You never found that special other, tried to end your life; you'd had enough

Oh forgotten soul that weeps at night, Why have you been betrayed?
Why couldnt true love wander by and ever look your way?
Sorrow burdens your once happy life, along with hatred and fear
The thought hurts to think you once had someone to hold dear

Oh forgotten soul that loathes every breath she takes
Another day, another night, and still every second her heart breaks
Sadness fills your ghostly spirit, Darkness held within makes you beam
Pain within your hollowed mind makes reality seem a dream

Oh forgotten soul of mine, Please try to smile today
Cutting and crying only helps fuel the pain
Maybe someday I'll find someone to share my love with one last time
For he will have the power to mend this broken heart of mine




Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2003-08-07 20:05:00]
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Re: Forgotten Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by DrogedaRain on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:52:00 PM AEST
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Oh Wow~! Tears flowed down my cheeks reading this. I would so love to give you a hug~!


Re: Forgotten Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by DrogedaRain on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:55:21 PM AEST
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Oh Wow~! Tears flowed down my cheeks reading this. Very impressive yet very heart breaking. When you least expect it the one for you will be right before you~! And your heart will know the minute you lay eyes on them~!


Re: Forgotten Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 05:39:48 AM AEST
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when you do find them they do have that power!!!!! beautiful read!!!!


Re: Forgotten Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 08:36:37 AM AEST
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Really a beautiful write.. but .. D.Rain has caused me more wonder..


Re: Forgotten Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 12:16:51 AM AEST
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This was good very poetic and captivating. I like how u started off each stanza. Excellent write.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Forgotten Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 11:56:14 PM AEST
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this write was awesome!!!!! It gave me chills. i hope that you find some one to mend yor broken heart!! i cried as i read this, it was gripping. i couldn't stop reading it. i read it about 10 times




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