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A Poem for Perfection

Contributed by TeenageEmoGirl on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You're so perfect it's outrageous
I'm secretly hoping it's contagious
Cough a little bit closer to me
You're so perfect it's sick to see
So pass that sickness along
In return I'll write you a love song
And I'll mean every word I write
To tell you just exactly how it feels
To lie in your arms tonight
So verse one is done
And the chorus is here
These words may seem corny
But they are sincere
This is the part you'll hear on repeat
Where I talk about how you are so sweet
How good you make me feel
And how perfect you are
Funny and kind with an intelligant mind
I even love your car
Time for verse two,
Time for something new
Where I say how you make me feel inside
You holding me close made me feel so good
I even almost cried
Because I don't think I'm good enough
And I don't know what you see
But knowing that you care
Well that's good enough for me
So verse two is through
And the chorus is here
These words may seem corny
But they are sincere
This is the part you'll hear on repeat
Where I talk about how you are so sweet
How complete you make me feel
And how perfect you are
You're all I could ever wish for
On some helpless falling star
At first I didn't know where to start
Now I don't know where to end
These feelings poured out straight from my heart
To more than a dear friend
I never did imagine, that perfection I would meet
I never could imagine, perfection's lips would taste so sweet
And I really do care this much
I mean every word I write
So sweet dreams my love,
You'll be sweet in mine tonight.




Copyright © TeenageEmoGirl ... [ 2003-08-07 19:05:00]
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Re: A Poem for Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by DrogedaRain on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 07:30:09 PM AEST
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TeenageEmoGirl, Very nice work. I enjoyed every minute of it~!


Re: A Poem for Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 05:31:46 AM AEST
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it just flows.....it's really sweet....


Re: A Poem for Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by xxmonstahxx on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 01:27:12 PM AEST
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so beautiful.. i know exactly how this feels..




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