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a mothers love gone wrong
Contributed by
eeka_taquito
on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
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you can hurt me,
break my leg at the knee.
bash me against the wall,
hope you wont have to make that 911 call.
punch me in the face,
so i can leave this place.
pull me into my room,
back into all the gloom.
drag me by my hair,
you wont see me tremble, cause i just wont care,
im used to your unkindness.
dont care how much you glare,
though your not being fair.
slap me across the cheek,
god im so weak.
can't fight for what i believe,
pain and hatred is all i receive.
i always give and would love to gain,
but you'd rather leave me out in the rain.
sock me in the stomache,
my hearts starting to plummet,
like my broken soul.
just dump me in a hole.
dig me in deep,
i wont make a peep.
bury my body,
since i've been so naughty.
no need to tell me, i know im a fool
but tell me mommy, why are u so cruel?
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2003-08-07 07:05:00]
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Re: a mothers love gone wrong
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 10:54:44 AM AEST
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| This is so sad & touching,I hope this was'nt a true story,If it was I hope you will see thru the pain.Christina |
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Re: a mothers love gone wrong
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by norm on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 11:23:19 AM AEST
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Your poem construction is fine
Keep writing by all means, however,
no matter what's going on with you,
write a happier poem...afterall, the
director of a hollywood production
has to follow the script. Make your
script a happier script. it's all make
believe, anyway........even if it isn't |
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Re: a mothers love gone wrong
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 05:05:29 PM AEST
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fitting title.....some are not meant to mother....while others live a lifetime getting over losing a child..........
i wrap you in my arms and send love..... |
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