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Array ( [sid] => 21560 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Self imposed Hipocrit [time] => 2003-08-07 03:05:00 [hometext] => This may be one of my favorite writes Let me know what you think [bodytext] => Your brains exposed
Your self imposed
Its etched in stone
Your Gods alone
Your reverence
Is irrelevent
Its pestilence
You can't prevent

Your minds opposed
To thoughts you chose
Of things unknown
You mindless drone
Your preference
Will leave regret
From your penitence
He is now upset

Your full of sin
Your fooling Him
He's growing thin
As your prayers begin
Your full of *****
You hipocrit
Your unadamant
Just remnant

He's closing in
And so is Grim
Stop posing Him
Admit you Sin
Your mind is thin
Its dead within
You'll never win
So start forgetting Him [comments] => 6 [counter] => 355 [topic] => 11 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Self imposed Hipocrit

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Your brains exposed
Your self imposed
Its etched in stone
Your Gods alone
Your reverence
Is irrelevent
Its pestilence
You can't prevent

Your minds opposed
To thoughts you chose
Of things unknown
You mindless drone
Your preference
Will leave regret
From your penitence
He is now upset

Your full of sin
Your fooling Him
He's growing thin
As your prayers begin
Your full of *****
You hipocrit
Your unadamant
Just remnant

He's closing in
And so is Grim
Stop posing Him
Admit you Sin
Your mind is thin
Its dead within
You'll never win
So start forgetting Him

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-08-07 03:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Self imposed Hipocrit (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:16:15 AM AEST
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Very well written, smart, bold, and meaningfull... great job... put it to those hypocrites!!!

Re: Self imposed Hipocrit (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 06:58:54 AM AEST
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Awesome... awesome write! It flows great and it builds up and builds up to the end where it packs a nice punch. Great job!

~ Moonlit

Re: Self imposed Hipocrit (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:33:23 PM AEST
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i love this!!!! i few choice people i could send these words to....good for you!!!!!

Re: Self imposed Hipocrit (User Rating: 1 )
by DrogedaRain on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 07:56:37 PM AEST
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Once I began to read, I axiously anticipated every following word~! Wonderful work to say the least~!

Re: Self imposed Hipocrit (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 01:41:22 AM AEST
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I liked this although I can't tell whether your putting down Christianity itself or just hypocrites in any case it was good. To echo Jason it was bold.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Self imposed Hipocrit (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 09:37:59 PM AEST
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This was a bold write, it was great, i am pretty much on the same page when it comes to religion, lol, this poem was awesome. u have such talent, don't waste it
Lisa

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