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Array ( [sid] => 21556 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Mind of a Mad Man [time] => 2003-08-07 00:35:00 [hometext] => They say I'm crazy, but that's not right, ah who cares, say goodbye.

Kane [bodytext] => Painful skies, help me to die,
Burned by the light, known on site,
Darkness a gift, come with me , let's take a trip,
To the throne of despair, drowning in blood, gasping for air,

Let your hate go, allow statan to take hold,
Give in to your darkest fears, let the blood run like tears,
Upon a cross he did die, can you see death in my eyes,
The world is a sis pool, accept that fact, go and stabb a friend in the back,

Bodies peaceful and still, murder is real,
Pull your gun, buck on someone,
That's what life about, walking around with a gun in my mouth,
Go ahead make my day, pull the trigger, watch my brains fly away,

This is life, no love on the streets, no love tonight,
Paceing back and forth, waiting for the momment of truth,
Look into my eyes, tell the world goodbye,
Shut your mouth, with a gun to your head, do you still have doubts.

Heart & Soul
Kane [comments] => 5 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Kane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The Mind of a Mad Man

Contributed by Kane on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Painful skies, help me to die,
Burned by the light, known on site,
Darkness a gift, come with me , let's take a trip,
To the throne of despair, drowning in blood, gasping for air,

Let your hate go, allow statan to take hold,
Give in to your darkest fears, let the blood run like tears,
Upon a cross he did die, can you see death in my eyes,
The world is a sis pool, accept that fact, go and stabb a friend in the back,

Bodies peaceful and still, murder is real,
Pull your gun, buck on someone,
That's what life about, walking around with a gun in my mouth,
Go ahead make my day, pull the trigger, watch my brains fly away,

This is life, no love on the streets, no love tonight,
Paceing back and forth, waiting for the momment of truth,
Look into my eyes, tell the world goodbye,
Shut your mouth, with a gun to your head, do you still have doubts.

Heart & Soul
Kane




Copyright © Kane ... [ 2003-08-07 00:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Mind of a Mad Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 02:26:40 AM AEST
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Go on....pull the trigger!! I dare you!!!
HA!!
Knew you couldn't do it..... you are a coward... much unlike the brave Phantom.... :>)
Jenni


Re: The Mind of a Mad Man (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:01:32 AM AEST
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This is good Kane.
"That's what life about, walking around with a gun in my mouth,
Go ahead make my day, pull the trigger, watch my brains fly away"
-this line is brilliantly said, such meaning behind these words... great write!


Re: The Mind of a Mad Man (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 10:59:34 AM AEST
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I believe we all have a little darkness in all of us! great work! Christina


Re: The Mind of a Mad Man (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:22:39 PM AEST
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darkness a gift, come with me, let's take a trip,...........it is a gift......one with great passion that many others are denied......awesome words!!!!!!!!!!!!


Re: The Mind of a Mad Man (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 09:55:09 PM AEST
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I liked this very vivid and descriptive. Keep on writing what your heart feels.

Peace,
Bobo (Joel)




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