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Array ( [sid] => 21553 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => oblivious to my tears.... [time] => 2003-08-06 23:35:00 [hometext] => i just finished this.....hope its good. i've been thinking...and maybe ill stop posting my poems here.....since,compared to all of these others, my poems suck. they belong in the trash, so farewell to all, hope u have good lives.....
Sincerely,
.:~*~Eeka~*~:.(ari) [bodytext] => i cry silent tears,
ones nobody hears.
they dont even try,
just push me aside.
i dont think they care,
cause they wont let me share,
the feelings inside.
so now i hide,
in the garage,
loves a mirage.
wont let them know i cry,
but they dont pry.
they say they'll be there,
when, inside, my heart tears.
but this has been done,
where i am theres no sun,
and they turned away,
went off to play.
they left me here to wallow,
in all of my sorrow.
so this is how i'll live out my life,
in anger, sadness, and strife..... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 43 [informant] => eeka_taquito [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
oblivious to my tears....

Contributed by eeka_taquito on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



i cry silent tears,
ones nobody hears.
they dont even try,
just push me aside.
i dont think they care,
cause they wont let me share,
the feelings inside.
so now i hide,
in the garage,
loves a mirage.
wont let them know i cry,
but they dont pry.
they say they'll be there,
when, inside, my heart tears.
but this has been done,
where i am theres no sun,
and they turned away,
went off to play.
they left me here to wallow,
in all of my sorrow.
so this is how i'll live out my life,
in anger, sadness, and strife.....




Copyright © eeka_taquito ... [ 2003-08-06 23:35:00]
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Re: oblivious to my tears.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 02:48:34 AM AEST
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This is an awesome write....hope you're not leaving...
Jenni


Re: oblivious to my tears.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:13:07 AM AEST
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Very powerful... loneliness is the most feared of all states... and the one thing that drives people really crazy... good job touching on this subject.


Re: oblivious to my tears.... (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:13:53 PM AEST
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"where i am there's no sun"....beautiful.....
i hope you're staying......you have a lot to contribute......


Re: oblivious to my tears.... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 09:13:55 PM AEST
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Hey, Ariana I loved this... I don't understand why u said it sucked although the writer is usually is his/her harshest critic. I loved this and I can relate to it and I am sure many other ppl can to. Keep on writing and e-mail me and tell me whats up. ONce again a great poem.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: oblivious to my tears.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 09:44:11 PM AEST
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i don`t think this sucks at all! if you stay i will come and read. i can`t see a reason for you to go. Crow


Re: oblivious to my tears.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 09:45:26 PM AEST
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i don`t think this sucks at all! if you stay i will come and read. i can`t see a reason for you to go. Crow




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