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[aid] => Mick
[title] => For soul force
[time] => 2003-08-06 18:45:00
[hometext] => After all we are all human beings at times of need
we have to resort to this...
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[bodytext] => Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!
When I was caught with fetters of the world
Struck by passions and egocentric emotions
If I am drowning in the waters of sorrows
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!
I know nothing about charms and prayers
I do not know what is worship and penance
And I never did charity or any works of merit
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!
I’ve no devotion and I never did meditation
I am craving for joys and sensual pleasures
I am lustful, sinful and also I am avaricious
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!
Neither the creator nor an angel nor any god
Nor the sun nor the moon comes down for me
I don’t know anyone except thou the savior
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!
When enemies and sorrows surround me and
When disputes, fires and waters surround me
Om Bhavaani Om protect me with thy forces
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!!
Thou art my soul force Om Bhavaani Om!!
Thou art my soul force Om Bhavaani Om!!
6-8-2003
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For soul force
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venkat
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Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
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Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!
When I was caught with fetters of the world
Struck by passions and egocentric emotions
If I am drowning in the waters of sorrows
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!
I know nothing about charms and prayers
I do not know what is worship and penance
And I never did charity or any works of merit
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!
I’ve no devotion and I never did meditation
I am craving for joys and sensual pleasures
I am lustful, sinful and also I am avaricious
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!
Neither the creator nor an angel nor any god
Nor the sun nor the moon comes down for me
I don’t know anyone except thou the savior
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!
When enemies and sorrows surround me and
When disputes, fires and waters surround me
Om Bhavaani Om protect me with thy forces
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!!
Thou art my soul force Om Bhavaani Om!!
Thou art my soul force Om Bhavaani Om!!
6-8-2003
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venkat
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2003-08-06 18:45:00]
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Re: For soul force
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 07:11:19 PM AEST
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a feeling of serenity flows while reading this..
great job
Shari |
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Re: For soul force
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 07:34:42 PM AEST
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| you sent me to a beautiful peaceful garden..........with these words chanting...... |
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Re: For soul force
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 07:36:04 PM AEST
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you sent me to a beautiful peaceful garden.....
with these words chanting..... |
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Re: For soul force
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 12:16:56 AM AEST
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| okay venkat, now i must ask, who are all these wonderful devine ones? i love your poetry but am lost trying to keep up with them all, say hello from me, for you are as lovely as they are:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: For soul force
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by venkat on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:19:14 AM AEST
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No multiplicity my dear frtiend.. only one universal soul and that exists as absolute.but we call it by various names.the names I mostly use are simple epithets...Kaalika means divine wisdom..Bhavaani means power consciousness..ie the Soul force..
thank you Nessa. venkat
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Re: For soul force
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by venkat on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:19:49 AM AEST
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No multiplicity my dear frtiend.. only one universal soul and that exists as absolute.but we call it by various names.the names I mostly use are simple epithets...Kaalika means divine wisdom..Bhavaani means power of consciousness..ie the Soul force..
thank you Nessa. venkat
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Re: For soul force
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 05:35:57 AM AEST
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| Words of wisdom ... a poem of great solace in times of need.... sincerely Jan |
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Re: For soul force
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by vincy on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 06:53:28 AM AEST
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You are such an inspiration Om! Venkat!! om..omm!.
To me it boils down to this, to have the faith
to start with, to conjure through prayer, divine
entities, dieties, even concepts which could manifest
and deliver what the prayer (poem) wishes.
In this case if I, the reader of the poem, can grant
you those wishes then my name should be included
amongst those of the Gods and Goddesses.
Like Sri. Vincy or hari Vincy rather than swami Vincy.
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Re: For soul force
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by venkat on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 07:25:54 AM AEST
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Wonderful Vincy!!! sri indicates the Supreme splendor of Hari..and Hari is the all pervasive Lord and the inner most soul of all..I am very happy to meet you on this site..Om Namo Naarayanaaya" your name V stands for Vishnu. I stands for Intellect..N stands for nature. C stands for multitude of forces
( clouds) or illusion created by Lord.Y stands for air and vital airs..hence your name for sri Hari..Om namo Vincy Om..I humbly submit at the feet of the devotees of Sri Hari..for Sri Hari speaks through them.. venkat |
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Re: For soul force
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by chandramohan on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 07:38:41 AM AEST
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Venkat bhayya,
Bhavani , the godess of power- is the force behind all poor,helpless,downtrodden and sinners.she will rescue all from their troubles
without discrimination.
wonderful presentation from u.
thank.u.
chandramohan. |
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Re: For soul force
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by venkat on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 07:43:31 AM AEST
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| Hugs my dearest friend..thank you.. venkat |
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Re: For soul force
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by kalika_vidya on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 07:14:57 AM AEST
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you need not bend your head before any man..for any reason except before
The Divine mother and the lord of Universe.
you are a great inspiration to many. |
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Re: For soul force
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by karoody on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 02:33:09 AM AEST
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i learn more and more from you everytime i read...this is wonderful!!!
thanx
kara |
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Re: For soul force
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by krismisevski on
Tuesday, 2nd September 2003 @ 03:44:45 PM AEST
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"I’ve no devotion and I never did meditation
I am craving for joys and sensual pleasures
I am lustful, sinful and also I am avaricious
Thou art my sole refuge Om Bhavaani Om!"
Great Lines! The whole poem reads well. These particuliar lines intrigue me. Perhaps they're the lines I identify with most. Very nicely written. This is my favorite piece of yours that I have read so far.
Kudos, Kris
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Re: For soul force
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 11:26:06 PM AEST
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| excellent, venkat, just remember repetition lessens the effect of the words and the verse, when it was powerful enough the first time. |
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