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Array ( [sid] => 21526 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => GOD DID IT TO ME [time] => 2003-08-06 06:45:00 [hometext] => I hate you God!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU TAKE HIM AND LEAVE ME HERE ALL ALONE IN A WORLD OF HATE.......... [bodytext] => bloody tears stream down my arm
as i search for a diffrent knife
i cant seem to find the vain
to end my pathetic life

God why wont you take me
and my tale of whoe
From this stage of a broken dream
and to them i'm still just a freak show

Every night i ask for only one thing
that you take me where it wont hurt
to be where angels sing
hurry because it does so hurt

My friend is where i want to be
he took his life
there is only one thing i dont see
he didnt live in strife

i did and it was your fault
I hope i get ***** shot
i hope i die a painful death
i hope you feel everything up to my last breath

choke me with a rope
my mom will be able to cope
Slice my neck with a knife
jut take my life!!!!! [comments] => 6 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 36 [informant] => dreadfulsuicide1570 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

GOD DID IT TO ME

Contributed by dreadfulsuicide1570 on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 06:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

bloody tears stream down my arm
as i search for a diffrent knife
i cant seem to find the vain
to end my pathetic life

God why wont you take me
and my tale of whoe
From this stage of a broken dream
and to them i'm still just a freak show

Every night i ask for only one thing
that you take me where it wont hurt
to be where angels sing
hurry because it does so hurt

My friend is where i want to be
he took his life
there is only one thing i dont see
he didnt live in strife

i did and it was your fault
I hope i get ***** shot
i hope i die a painful death
i hope you feel everything up to my last breath

choke me with a rope
my mom will be able to cope
Slice my neck with a knife
jut take my life!!!!!

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Re: GOD DID IT TO ME (User Rating: 1 )
by eeka_taquito on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 10:15:01 AM AEST
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i know exactly how ur feeling....i know its so annoying when people say that but its true. reading this was just...wow.....i mean, everything u explained in this poem describes me and the things i've been through and am still going through. i hope ur doing better, and...well the death of a friend is very hard to deal with, especially if they took their own life, just know that things get better...u just never forget.......but would u want to?

Re: GOD DID IT TO ME (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 03:26:11 PM AEST
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good read...... losing a friend in this way is hard.....you conveyed your pain well!!!!

Re: GOD DID IT TO ME (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 09:23:04 PM AEST
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This was very good and angry. I must say I loved the first stanza. I must also say that your hate is mis-directed. God did not take your friends life he took his own. I know what its like to want to end your pain and go to Heaven, but no matter what u say ppl will be hurt thats one of the only things that has kept me going. Great poem and I hope you can forgive God and carry on with your life...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: GOD DID IT TO ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 11:38:12 PM AEST
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i have to agree with bobo, but you have created a picture for me, i can see you screaming these words at the top of your lungs. thats good to get it out. be well, Crow

Re: GOD DID IT TO ME (User Rating: 1 )
by FaithHope on Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 11:21:07 PM AEST
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That was an amazing poem. It was so deep and emotional. I know how you feel, God took my brother away from me. But you got to remember that God does everything for a reason, you might not realize now, or ever but there is always a reason and he is waiting for you to come back to him. Good luck, and great poem!

Faithhope

Re: GOD DID IT TO ME (User Rating: 1 )
by GODSBESTIMAGE on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 12:55:47 PM AEST
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GOD BLESS,

YOU ARE DIRECTING YOUR HATE AT THE WRONG PERSON. WHATEVER GOD DOES, HE DOES IT FOR A REASON. WE ALL MUST DIE ONEDAY. BUT WE MUST LEARN TO GET UP AND KEEP GOING.

TRY TO KNOW GOD. HE'S THERE WAITING FOR YOU. KNOW HIM. GET A RELATIONSHIP WITH HIM. HE WILL SHOW YOU EVERYTHING YOU NEED TO KNOW.

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